One Piece Rpg

the story is great and interesting about a man who become vault treasure hunt. but the most cringe or the most i dont like it is the author set the place in USA and the way they chat is like chinnese not just mc but everyone !!. many cursing and many racist dialog. author not do some research about USA first and write it by his own understanding about America..

its not horrible which is alot better than most of the trash webnovels been posting recentlyits character's are realistic and not idiots plus we don't have a random inclusion of cultivation. the character has realistic wants and doesn't aim to be some sort of god eitherit has plenty of good humor mixed in and is enjoyable to read plus it doesn't have any sort of adventuring aspect so we get to stay at homethe worlds stereotypes are a bit exaggerated but it makes for good plot development and while predicable it's not to the point that it gets boring overall not bad.. or in webnovel standards its GREAT

Author here, and this is not a shameless review. Not a proper review either. Basically, this is not a review. This is important information for my current readers, and future readers.Note: I have decided to remove all chapters, and re-upload them again while reducing the word count from 3k words to 1,5k words minimum. And then to 2k minimum after a hundred chapters or so.Hopefully, this will only take a day, if not just two days. Thank you.

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What a great start. Nice mix between dark comedy and typical cultivation Troupes. Just hope to see more.P. S. Why did you try writing cultivation story?

The characters seem well fleshed out, worldbuilding is solid but, you should update more frequently, on the first day I published a short prologue and the first chapter, but other than that, its all good