Hawk9970
It's seems you're getting closer to the real dark side
After chapter 9 the translation is way better. Hopefully it stays that way.
Man, I feel cheated with that ending.So the story was rushed to hell in the last 20 or so chapters and the payoff was so stupid.Apparently this novel is a sequel novel and so the final villain behind the scenes is the previous story’s MC. And the reasoning for the BS Sheyan goes through is so stupid like I clocked out after it was revealed. Like fvck this guy.I don’t even want to read the previous story. I don’t give a fvck who he is, he was so annoying being such a gnat to Sheyan for such an annoying reason.I don’t even care that he’s still alive at the end, like this shit ruined this story. I don’t care if previous MC is now gonna still cause trouble for current MC in a future novel. Why even bring him in? Why even reveal all this last second, author? Why even bother writing a novel about this MC if you’re still gonna make the story about last MC in the end?I wouldn’t even be mad if the author gave hints to past MC existing in this novel causing trouble here and there throughout Sheyan’s journey, but he literally came out of nowhere in the last 5 chapters. Like, what the fvck. This is some bullshit.
Wang zhilin poor bitch HAHAHAHHAHAHBA
Don't bother reading this, it's just another stupid and "naive" FL with a smart yet surprising dumb when he's supposed to be smart ML. Along with brilliant villains and underrated side characters. Despite the hatred I have for pei ge's sister, I can't help but Respect the fact that she was able to ruin her life to such an extent without even trying. This just goes to show how dumb pei ge is
Drop it after around chapter 600. He went on a random healing arc all of a sudden and it would be fine if it was short and still had him cultivate but he’s going around not getting stronger involving himself into issues that is not his business forgetting his main goal which was getting stronger. He still hasn’t broken through for over 500 chapters.
I’m giving a good review cause most of the time I read and forget if it isn’t bad but isn’t great but I returned to an old novel that I read and immediately remembered this after ending and this is rare I like the story a lot
Question Author!
I finished reading 3 of your novels (All of them are great and well written btw) and was wondering if you plan on creating a novel where the MC and ML flip flop like in Prince and his
Fool, albeit briefly? So far it was only that book that you had the MC as the top and had Yi Chen open to being the bottom but Zi Han not following through in The Assassins Enemy Lover. I think it'll be interesting to say the least and spice up the story a bit, at least in my opinion but anyways if you see this let me know and keep up the great work!
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