Book is great I hope it makes it into a actual book ever better if it becomes a actual book that the author isn't charging a arm and a leg for and gets updated often
I'll be honest, I couldn't last 5 chapters... This novel doesn't live up to the expectations instilled in me by MTL reviewers. Wasted energy stones... This novel is basically the author living his fantasies, no real story just everything going good for MC, some faceslaps. I even put up with the useless writing quality...
the start feels like a ripoff of The Disastrous Life of Saiki-kun. anime could be a fan fiction as i am assuming positive intent........................................................................................................................................will probably change score later if it gets more original......................................................................................
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Anyone have any news on the author I loved this book so much and now it’s just radio silence for so long :(
Story is actually written very well as in grammar, flow and characters, plot when considered individually. But big problem is how mc and plot connects, or should I say doesn't connect. Mc just doesn't have much agency and there's not much internal motivations in story form mc to do what he does. It seems like author develops some interesting plot, and then mc is made to flow trough that plot like puppet, mc just doesn't seem to have agency. There's also the problem of mc being constantly bailed out by his ring when stuff gets even slightly hard, it's always some magical thing that bails him out, not his own intellect, skill or perseverance. This again reduces mc's agency, it's just very lame. It would not matter if it was just sometimes, but both of this things happen constantly. Good example is whole thing happening in mc's village, he was already ready to go, he didn't have any reason to stay, no friends or family, no lure of great rewards, and again he was planning to leave. But then author made the plot happen, which I do agree is great when considered in isolation, but mc just started to participate in solving this mystery and helping around and we have absolutely no idea why, and there's no internal reason in story that tells us why. He just does like some zombie because the plot is there so obviously he should somehow participate in it.He even wanted to see Lord of Hei dudes, but again, there was just no reason for that, he just wanted to because story required him to. There was no mention of potential rewards or anything that would help mc, if anything seeing mysterious strong person is just an huge threat.I would really like to give this better review, but I just can't because story till 150 has been mostly just about boat(mc) being pushed around by waves, and every time boat is about to crash into huge rock, another wave just comes in and pushes the boat to the side. I would like that boat to have some oars, sails and actual person directing it.
Dear MLB,For the last year there was only 40 chapters. When will we see me chapters? Other your two novels also have long time without updates. At least can you tell us that DC will be continued?
I'm so glad I'm the first reader that will comment here! I was amazed in this book, really. Especially the first few chapters. Update soon, Author!
I haven't read today's update, and I don't feels like bothering myself, HAAAHAAA am engaged in another story book for the time being, and am just here to check how you guys are doing, HAAAHAAA
it was a great novel and I enjoyed it
Every book built up the next one. Every book we get more information, and more depth in every character's personality, attitude, thoughts and life. I loved the first book, I thought I won't feel myself that excited with the other books, that I felt with that one. Boy, was I wrong... thank you, Muse!
The plotline is too similar to several of the books available here. Also the chapters are too expensive.