the story is fucking amazing at first i was a bit annoyed when i thought the fairy was able to manipulate him but i read through it and holy moly the story got even better. it has amazing potential and i suppose its even better for me cuz i like non human or undead mc's. good luck author and keep doing an amazing job
This story is so bad I can't believe it was chosen by higher powers to even be on the site. One wonder if the writer was on drugs while writing it like Steven King liked to do.
Hey author why did you make the mc so naive and idiot in chapters 80 - 90. It makes me way too angry to read the next chapters
I guess its normal (is it?) for chinese WNs to have the MC automatically choose whos bad or good, friend or foe the moment he sees them, and all the women automatically be attracted to the MC, man its bad news for you if you get the aggro of the MC you're automatically a jerk, asshole, etc. And you're lucky if the MC likes you because you're automatically a cool guy or something.Also the author does not know how gravity works, theu are apparently ditching the dying earth for a new planet which is 10,000 times larger than earth, i was like WTF??Also too much names to remember to the point where when a name pops up you wonder if this guy/gal already showed up previously and just got forgotten.
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Amazing work! This is one of these super enjoyable novels here imo ?.I don't dare say that this is a masterpiece, but you will definitely not regret giving this novel a chance.
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This is a very good novel, and everyone should vote this with their energy stones. I know I tend to vote randomly, but this made me binge read till 2AM right when I was about to quit WN for the day, I want more.
Terrible generic Wuxia novel, that can be found anywhere. Already read too many of them. Not another one.I've already read Wuxia novels TLed on this site and it is just dredging to read.
Nice start .One chapter per day Xianxia genre novel with r-18 scenes Need more chaptersNeed more chaptersGood good good good good good good
The system is strong but not broken (Yet) the power gain so far is not rushed so much that the novel is dead in 200 chapters, the characters seem to possess intelligence and are not just stupid side characters there to make the MC look smart, the MC is decently smart, not over the top but above average.The world building isn't there yet but it has potential.Overall i hope this is picked, but it's not a badly translated power fantasy so maybe it won't be picked, the name kinda lets it down and i feel that it will put people off trying this.
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