Overall the story is great i like the concept of the story its just in video games genre "Little Sister" is so overused i get it you know its just that its too cringe xD iam not here to criticize just wanted to review xD
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this isn't a serious read and at 20 chapters it's not bad but it's not great. the mc is an idiot just straight up. he creates a character and his talent is luck. he bumbles into something every few steps he either bumps into an npc that gives him a quest or falls down a mine shaft and almost lands on a boss mob. the funniest so far is whe he dumps a viagra powder on a spider boss and a bear boss at the same time and things get interesting lol.anyway the is an idiot, he is a returnee so he names his character "The Returnee" and you get the typical heroic poses. so if you are looking for a light read it's not bad. the translation and spelling is good as also the grammar. if anyone knows the raws would be nice to post it please.
To put it simply. It starts well but becomes very disappointing and kept getting worse as you keep reading. I stopped at chapter 30 at first and read again to see if I misjudged that was up to 120 I couldn't read it anymore. It was simply terrible in terms of character and story development. I definitely do not recommend this. From how this is progressing, web novel representatives prefer to widen their novel number count. It doesn't matter if it is good quality or not. That's what I am seeing anyway.
2 chapters for week? God. Come on qidian. Please get someone to help the translator.Help him out help him out help him outHelp him out help him out help him outHelp him out help him out help him out
Typical WuxiaBut formatting makes it completely unreadable for cultured people like myself. No paragraph structuring at all, just barbaric.Anyways MC wakes up in a dudes body and gains a system that tells him the success rates of things, like his chances of breaking through, or fucking someone.Typical, typical, typical.Anyways, he instantly finds some OP scripture that only he could cultivate because the system told him that he could, and coincidentally he becomes the student/lover of a lady that was searching for someone that could cultivate that scripture (wow shock)Nothing impressive, the formatting makes me nauseous
I really enjoyed it at the start but as it is now I'd want to give it 0 stars. The Author isn't releasing very frequently anymore and the last time I caught up it felt rushed towards the current chapters. Basically it was a good universe and degraded into a ****ty story and lazy? author(there was some talk about him working on another novel). So much development was wasted by abandoning the characters or forgetting items for hundreds of chapters. I'd say the first 2 or 3 hundred chapters were a good read then the author went crazy and started power leveling the characters making it seem like it would end soon, and by the end you've forgotten a dozen characters who should've had much larger roles.
I laught so much I could cry, this novel is hilarious, it will defenitly be on my reading list!The main character to level up with the system is so shameful and how he test the ideas, picking peaches etc....
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So funny! So very funny!! Though I think it might be funnier to girls than boys...laughed through most of the initial chapters and gave myself hiccups! ???????
author i think you should check the chapter after writing .there are full of mistakes we don't even know what is happening in the story because of the mistakes.i think you should check before updating the chapters.author you want to give your attention more for correcting the mistakes rather than the updating of the chapter .any one can tell me where I can read the novel without mistakes and the raw name of the novel .
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