Heaven's Awakening

The story might be somewhat the same as the others but it is good on its own way. It is not that good in some area such as the translations and editing but try reading it for fun or to kill time not by finding faults at it.Btw. Don't mind my word construction in this review. I'll admit I am not good at it.??

To put it simply. It starts well but becomes very disappointing and kept getting worse as you keep reading. I stopped at chapter 30 at first and read again to see if I misjudged that was up to 120 I couldn't read it anymore. It was simply terrible in terms of character and story development. I definitely do not recommend this. From how this is progressing, web novel representatives prefer to widen their novel number count. It doesn't matter if it is good quality or not. That's what I am seeing anyway.

Nice development and nice story background...Nice main character settings and side characters settings..Nice system settings (even though it look like familer )...

I liked the story until now, which is around 300 chaps.. the translation went awry a lot of times which was quite frustrating.. also does this thing have a map? like the map of dukedom of leo, the desert and senwaya range? its so confusing to imagine.. would have been better with a map.. i mean kingdom building ones gotta have a map right? ahhhh give me a map plz

The story awesome! The world building awesome! The characters awesome!What more can I say?Yeah! The trillion plus year old mc acts mature but is a mummy's boy.Normally, I'm tired of cultuvation novels but the cultivation here is more of the western type with mages, warriors, etc. The use of fate in the novel is mind blowing asf.This book has not yet gotten the attention it really deserves. The intricate mind of the mc gives me the chills, I love how he's not instantly a political ecoert despite all 33 lives. The characters are well written, I believe I said that before.And most of all!! The MC is handsome!! He holds the hearts of both males and female and the best he has silver hair or is it white?

This story is a good read to try out. It starts off slow then it gets better at somehwere around ch.40. Most reviews are on grammar, all i say is come on humans arent perfect. Most reviews are also from those who stop at the first 10 chapters and havent read the whole novel. Give it a try If your have nothing to read.