Hmmm to summarize it i'd say its OP storyline. Try giving it a chace and surely u would b amazed. Balanced character, balances theme and nothing seems out of order. it is a real gem.
Should be removed, even the caption can tells you such.
At some point the MC becomes a puppet of the intelligence agency and other than accepting that there's no other emotion. Takes getting bent over way too calmly.
This novel manages to blend a sophisticated narrative style with entertaining dialogue, which is quite the feat. The setting of this story is wonderfully described, and the characters are memorable. Development wise, this story seems to be taking things slowly (very slice of life like), and that's not bad at all. It allows us readers to get familiar with the characters and their world. In short, I'd def recommend this novel if you're interested in a gaming novel. Keep up the good work author :D
As the writer of the book I will of course give myself a five star review :P. Anyways i hope that you guys enjoy the novel please leave me any constructive criticism or nonconstructive I can take it. Have fun reading my novel and remember i hold all the spoilers he he.
I just wanted to rate the story, but webnovel would have me write a review, that too with a minimum word limit! No wonder people don't like to read here!Onto the story, it is very good, and I enjoy it a lot. It is based on the idea that the MC goes against chosen children of heaven and emerges victorious. He encounters and defeats all common main character tropes, including a regressor, a reincarnator, one who had his engagement annulled, one who has been trained by retired hidden masters and so on. It is not too heavy on the planning side, but it is still better than 99% of the novels on this site which are downright trash.Special shout-out to the translators who translating this. I really appreciate your work, the timely updates and the fact that you've kept it free of charge. Kudos!
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like it because its funny and about business on modern day although there many things that are not clear and impossible to happen. anyway i want to read more so i put 5 stars
So much filler, so much dumb characters. I'm astonished with author's ability to make something THAT bad.---------‐----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
The characters develop well as the story unravels, it has been enjoyable to read so far. However some of the plot seems familiar, or generic (This is just my opinion from reading so many books). I hope that it will update soon though.
this is a very good story who recommend to people if liking the omegaverse also grammar Issue this one has a bit? also ???over all not bad
It seems likea good story, but badly translated. Despite many missing connecting words, and improper word form choices, I was interested enough to keep reading until I ran out of chapters. I suspect that practice will improve the writing quickly, because the story telling is decent in spite of the slightly broken English.Some suspension of disbelief is required for me, since the setting feels rather game-within-a-game, but as long as I set aside the expectation that the main character lives in the same reality that I do, it seems fairly consistent so far.