The MC is very stupid, being the Heir to the God of death but doesn't train in any of Death's ability even though Death gave him advice on how to become stronger. He then goes and waste time raising a baby instead of training. So he wasn't able to save his hometown from getting destroyed and ends up dead and turned into stone by the princess. Story would have gone better if he went and trained with the God of Death after he died from the princess curse then return.
Indeed unique author.......
We have seen many of this author work....
Tho all of them are dropped.....
I hope he will find his taste here!
No.I wish!
Very nice!
The chapters are nice and long, and full of great descriptive detail that makes this story a pleasure to read. I love the plot, especially with the idea of restarting a life after a tragedy has occurred. The characters are well fleshed out, though I would maybe like to see a bit more detail in their personality here and there.
I think the one thing the author needs to work on is being careful not to switch tenses. There were several occasions that the tenses shifted, and a few grammatical errors, but these can easily be fixed.
Great work author
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seems interesting hope it will get chosen
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33 chapter review~
So, basically a simping novel, the mc gets accepted as a direct disciple and needs to be filial to his master to get DP (Devotion Points), with that he can buy a lot of things.
Well, mc isn't retarded like the other mcs and buys skills to further improve his devotion to his master to earn even more DP.
Well, maybe some will be confused because they skim through but of 33 chapters only 3 days passed by so don't get confused.
Also, the mc is quite strong even though he is a mortal (Due a factor but you will know it if you're going to read this novel)
There are several things mentioned from the background but I can't really remember it. They did explain the power levels and all the general info about sects and such, also the world is plagued by wraiths who are the bane of cultivators and they need to find a way to deal with them apparantly.
Romance? Probably and most likely his master, more love interest? There is one but I'm not sure, if some seniors know if this novel is going to a harem do tell me... Pls.
Translation Quality: 5* (Smooth like baby hands in my fridge)
SoU: 5* (Trial Read)
Story Development: 4* (At this point it's just devotion to his master and the wraith part)
Character design: 4* (Solid personalities)
World Background: 3.5* (I know it can't be 3.5* but meh, it's not 3 but also not 4)
Total score: 4.2
Personal Rating: 4.5
i like your synopsis, also read the initial chapters and all i can say is continue writing. i will be waiting for more updates. i like how you flesh out the story also, kudos!
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from what I've read, this is a very intriguing story. it started off slow, but I prefer my stories like this, so it was a plus for me. I didn't get bored during this, and blew threw a bunch of chapters at one go without realizing it. I love the sci-fi aspect, especially the black hole. astronomy lover you see. and if u love sci-fi, like me, you should totally read this!
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