First 10 chapter is boring af... But after that kinda interesting!! Need more chapter please...
Make you feel curious
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Great potential, horrible writing. The names make no sense, the way the characters act doesn't make sense, and how much time passes in the story isn't explained at all. The author could have make a really good story, but it's rushed and made into something that is hard to read.
Poor editing. Hard to read with the irregular spacing.
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I really like it! My only gripe is that the author mixes up entrée with appetizer all the time.
Hahahahaha I hope that you won't drop this novel I will try it...............................................................................................................................................................................
This wasn’ bad at all, I went into it expecting that I’d waste time. Yet despite my mindset going in I was superbly mistaken! This is extremely good! Hats off to the author! Keep this up and you’ll have a real bestseller on your hands!! Keep doing what your doing. I would 100% recomend!
My brain cells are f*cking dying. The grammar errors, the plot, the mc, everything in this novel can cause brain cancer. I can understand the general plot but sometimes you won't understand what's happening in between. We have a 4 yo mc which for me really killed off everything. The story is kinda stupid, it's like it's been written by a 10 yo and cmon what on the actual f*ck is boomx300000. "Best sfx ever." Bloody hell the harem members are dumb especially the girl with the eat me I'll kill u system. I don't know what's wrong but she really pisses me off. The fights are OK the power ups are OK but overall I lost my mental capacity to think. And in all honesty reading this is like a hate-f*ucking session almost like r*pe. I am warning future readers, if you want a serious story gtfo of here cause this ain't for u. Well that's all I have to say and I'm really sorry dear author I just really need to vent my frustrations hope you understand that we have different views and opinions but still thank you for making this story possible.
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I'm not a tech/futuristic nerd to comment on the AI setting story, but damn this story is worth it! Too bad it was too short.
Funny, heart warming, ****** but loveable plot that made me smile in the end. Hopefully the author would write more in the future
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