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ainda não li mas por ser fanfic hxh merece 5 estrelas c
more..chapters..please.......
at first I had some hope that this novel would be different from the other thousands novels, but in the end is just one more trash. ,.....................................................................
story good. idea good. speech of who's talking and when songs play could be clearer. stability of updates is becoming better. i had a detailed explanation until it got deleted and i had to do this again and i cba
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The summary made this story to look simple and makes you assume there might be Plot for this "Witch" maybe MC changed her fate. But then again I've read too many shoujos with Witch plots so I may be overestimating things. A male MC makes me want to read this!! Just no Harem please. Lol
Looks good but I wish that other NPC mob was translated instead. Can't remember but it showed up here as well. He became a Final Boss and journeys a long with the Players and harasses them. It had a better summary!
Looking at other authors, this shameless ant will learn to give a ridiculous review. This ant would love comments to improve on the writing style. The format is a bit weird since this ant mainly writes on another writing platform.
Fully fleshed out world, complex hero, top notch writing, characters that have their own motivations and don't exist just to further the plot. The plot itself seems way more GOTh than the-chosen-one. This book deserves a lot more attention.
i can tell from the start that this has good potential and I really hope that you bring it a long way. you can't really find the good eat and evolve style novels.
I love it so far! I really wish it has more rates and views but I'm root for this book❤I love Max Ryder and I'm looking forward to see his development and see how you shape all the other characters.