Hello, I am here to review this. Honestly, I am gonna recommend this one. While I was reading I wanted to tell you something.
At first, I noticed that in the first chapter, you have add a author's notice in the first chapter. But you don't have to do it there You have a section to add author's thought. When you write choose that option and write your notices there. So it won,t bother to the story.
I noticed a few mistakes with Pnctual marks. But it's not that remarkable. So you can be more careful...
Anyways, The plot is flowing smoothly and I think the story will get more and more better in the future. So recommended!
Keep going author,
couldn't continue after chapter 16, its all about sucking milking and cuddling,
not for me.
it gets very wierd at later chapters with clone and stuff. Basically clone NTR as clones have their individual soles and stuff.
Also MC is very unlikeable , simp and staying within his sister's garsps.
The whole novel give NTR vibes sorry :(
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I really liked how you have progressed the story so far, though I admit to skipping over certain parts due to them hitting a little close to home. I really relate to Tamiko and what he goes through...even the aspect of being emotionally numb after it all. I also like how you portrayed Gabe as that is exactly how people imagine things to go once they discover their soulmate (though I would lie if I said I didn't feel at least a bit sorry for him after he discovers that Tamiko is his soulmate). I can't wait to read more :)
for the moment everything is going well I hope it will stay like this for a long time congratulations in any case
very 'NICE' story, the MC is being pampered by this loving slime girl, there's some thing going on with a strange cult thing, this seem very interesting ? and I'm giving this review to motivate the author, this is a great novel man.?
strong protagonist hiding true power
emotional scenes without cringe
time!
how can one not love this novel?
Bad, just tryna bring the rating down thats how bad it is. .........................................................................,,,,,,,,
Hey yo! I'm not fond in reading nor watching a horror book but then it has thrill so fair enough that I did take a look at your wonderful creation! Ur book is great and highly recommend it to everyone!
Lovelots,
Cie-LbiTch(Ciieee<3)
Ps: just work a little bit more on your spacing, punctuation and grammar. Don't be down, it's for the improvement and I went into the route before so, I wanna help u out
Wow, few novels pull you in like this, especially with a weighty subject like Death and what happens when we die. I'm excited to follow this one's existential exploration of the hereafter. Keep it up, author!
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