Reading a novel like this is like smoking its stupid,unhealthy and make you die faster. but still you do it cause its your hobby.
For **** sake Qidian translate something that worth to read and please please please i beg of you DONT STEAL IT FROM OTHERS.
The plot of the story is quite interesting, so was the first and second chapter. The way the author describes the scenes is pretty good too. I am curious to see what will happen next to the protagonist and how this story will become a murder mystery story. Although it would be better if the chapters were updated more often. Keep up the good work author! :)
Can you please introduce the world background and the MC background or status 1st, because it's really hard to understand your novel if this novel is modern setting or Eastern fantasy? Or both?
I want to see how far the power of traps can go... xD <4
Please don't drop the book even after WPC is finished... I want to see you write till the end muhahah! Also, you need 5k words to qualify. Will you be ok with just 1 chapter? (Now I'm just outright pressuring you to complete this...)
Anyways, fighting! Traps rule!
Very Good continue.
the story was ok at first but then mc starts to have negative iq and retardation syndrome around ch 45 and 52 which pretty much ruin the story via author forcing situations that is uncharacteristic of the mc which only leads me to think its beta mc and dummy mc furthermore when mc is in building he doesn't even make smart decisions like why would he now think about his status screen first omg i don't wanna think about more things that's wrong with the mc the more i think the more i realize was stupid things that he did in the story READ THIS IF YOU HAVE NOTHING ELSE *shrugs*
I am a fan of the author first book. One of the best story that I've read so far and looking forward to this adventure as well.Grammar is smooth, world building is amazing and updates are stable. Author is good with back and the characters are described to give you an image heheReally. There are no complaint. Hope u join us and let's enjoy this book together.
I absolutely love IT! I finally found a story with ruthless and merciless ML and I will be damned if I won't read it whole! So keep writing pls!! I can't wait for another update! <3
Thoroughly mediocre, and sub-par in some categories.Easy read, not a complicated story, turn brains off for plot holes, turn brains on for grammar.Let's start with the story. So far, there isn't much, but that is to be expected. The thing that drives me insane is the brokenness of the gacha. It's just a way to give the MC the stuff he needs. It's always rare, great, epic or needed. Herbs won't grow in the dungeon? don't worry, the next gacha will fix that. Want to start smithing? The gacha giveth. Unlimited materials? The gacha has your back. MC should make a shrine to the gacha and the dungeon core. Sorry, but I really hate some kind of plot device that constantly gives the MC whatever he needs at the moment for virtually no cost or effort.Speaking of the dungeon core, she is a non-character. No personality except exceptionally timid. You don't see, hear or notice her at all until she is required to pass on a message or as comic relief. Same for Kuro. The bandits need a course in Banditry 101. The most interesting quirky one was a passing adventurer. The MC dungeon master, Mr Ghost, hasn't shown much personality either except 'grandfatherly' towards a young boy. The boy's guards should be executed for being too stupid too. Mr Ghost will manage all skills. He will smith, do alchemy, fight with sword, spear, bow and magic and basically be everything this story needs and do everything that needs doing.... Right.There is no info on what a dungeon is or does, no feeling for their place in the world. Either it's something that will come up later, or it is assumed you have read similar novels before. So far, no world building.It was updating regularly until january.Finally, the writing. It's average for not very good non-native English. The sentences mostly make sense with no bad idiom, but the tenses are hopelessly mixed up. Even worse if the verb is also a noun, like a a walk / to walk. It appears the spell check the author is using is hopeless at that.
Okay I'm going to be the first one to review this. The story is good but has to be better. And it only has 20 chapters if you can write more it would be better.
Warnings on the intro were good. I think it's needed because of using third party to publish. Story is good, i couldn't measure the updating frequency, they all have been released in same day. keep going on to write.
only problem is that this shun long is too prideful for no reason at all, I somewhat accept he wants to become strong so he doesn't die again even though the motivation was crap and forcefull but where the **** does he get his stupid ass pride from?