Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Hello, Author here. A few points need to be noted before reading the novel.1) The story is more like fanfic of Mahabharata2) I took a few liberties, changing the plot as well as the world background for convenience.3) If readers don't know the Original Story, characters, and certain terms, it will be difficult to understand.4) More than one female lead for MC.5) Romance isn't the focus of the novel.6) MC will be OP7) Readers can expect a lot of side stories for central characters.8) The story won't end at the war. But, we'll see when we get there.9) The updates will not be stable. I write and publish when I can afford the time.
My only question is if there will be a harem, I mean, he's a god, I think it's necessary. I add the other star if positive. I saw that in your previous novel there was a harem label.By the way, I have not read your previous novel because it seems that the main character was not dominated despite controlling destiny.
I'm sorry I personally like this story. This is just my opinion and I know a lot of people are tired of novels like these but I'm a sucker for system novels. I may have trash taste and I like almost anything but hey, it's just my opinion. I like how the sect can upgrade itself but it's too random and just happened whenever the MC needs it. There hasn't been enough chapters for me to judge character development correctly. We have no background story for when he was on earth but that happens with a lot of novels. Nothing would change if the MC was a native. There feels like no challenges are present and the MC can just steamroll his way to victory by a landslide with no difficulties at all.MC doesn't act like a real person if he was actually transmigrated into a xianxia world and adapted quickly but hey, it's a xianxia novel. Anyways, that's about it. I love trash.
dam it 2020, if you are looking for some story where mc struggle like dog the you have come to the right place, this bok is waiting for you to explore...just it have so many emotions packed in one chapter
It's actually a nice read with good mc and interesting naruto world knowledge and excited to see what's next. And more chapters fast plzzzzzzz
Great book unfortunately it was dropped or never picked up. So many gems fall to the wayside....its a pity........................... really ....................
A list of novels and fanfics that are good and you can give them a try and it will help you in not wasting time searching for books to read.None of the books in the list are mine and I am only mentioning their names,tags and a few important details.Only books I read will be in this list
This is trash.
The system is the only ok tier aspect of this novel.
The author have no life experience or made no effort when writting this novel because everything sound childish, illogical or would be dangerous to do in real life.
Other than those scene that wouldn't happen in real life there is only badly written faceslap scenes.
TL;DR: It’s bad.
The story is bad but the bad translation makes it even worse. The main character is also pretty stupid and other characters are also unrealistic. Futhermore the main character’s attitude towards other countries makes me believe the story will get racist in the future.
Let’s start with my first problem. Why is the prettiest and smartest girl in class suddenly defending him despite having no relation prior? The main character even says they never had much to do with each other so why?
She even chooses to risk her future to go to the same world for him. Obviously with more people going to the same world the more competition there would be. Yet she still chooses to follow him even after he ignores her act of kindness to resolve the grudge between him and a young master.
He states publicly that he’ll ruin the young master and his family despite having nothing to do so (didn’t have his overpowered system yet). Seeing this, I had already see the massive plot armor he’ll have to save him from his stupidity.
The body he reincarnates into is broke and his girlfriend is just ditching him. Yet he shaves and becomes a massive hunk immediately attracting a bunch of girls. They state he’s hotter than some models so why couldn’t the body’s owner be one? We’re given no further information of his previous life before he powers up to the strongest person on the planet in a second. It’s like the poor circumstances weren’t even there.
The young master holding a grudge on the main character for 10 years is also pretty stupid. You’d think he’d get smarter being in a large family for 10 years. He apparently made his family stronger and is also stated to be cunning. His actions really don’t show that though.
very good author-san i like it very much i cant wait for more update. I feel bad for the mc though. i cant wait to give this novel an energy stone
man why didnt this get pickedddddddddddd, I swear every good novel I find ends up getting buried by this unfair tribulation called trial reads