The pace of the story is good from what I've read so far. Some parts are kind of confusing but it'll be better once the author entered the editing phase. Characters are decently made too.
Overall, this one has a lot of potential~
This story is well written and doesn't really have any grammatical errors which makes for an easy read, however for me this story was just dull and brainless ,all the characters seem to have an IQ of about 50 and the mc is just so mind numbingly stupid it gave me a headache ,the actions of most characters remind me of the trashy Chinese novels full of young master face slapping and a secret mysterious family hiding in the shadows for no apparent reason
It's finally back let's gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
So, first of all, I didn't read everything but two chapters... I'll be honest lol, anyways, those two chapters I read, it was incredible, it was good story in a plot and I love the beginning of the story, it was awfully good! nice advance information.
ps. don't worry, I'll read soon!
There's a bit too much brackets that it felt hard to read in thge bginning, but now I'm 7 chapters in, it had kind of grown on me...the main lead character was a bit too hyper i think, he thinks to himself too much...but i guess it must be the character design by the writer.
Dude have you asked the author's permission to post this fanfic here?
from the start the mc starts acting like an idiot, stopping to think in battle about which cool lines to say, the system prompts are way to annoying repeating the same thing over and over, i quit there
First book I decided to read here, great story, great plot. Fantastic adventure. Looking forward to when I have more time to read. Makes me want to read all night .
almost the same story a few months back. was a Chinese novel, guy finds a portal in his apt bathroom and brings gs tech back to get rich.
realy like the concept of this book. its something ive never read before, the kingdom building aspect is intresting but what intrests me more it the little almost side storys written from the prespective of one of the animals. its new to me, the way its pieced together.
I would suggest, you guys read 'I level up by being idle'That novel is the best of this batch, and way more interesting than this one.Funny and light hearted, I am sure you'll like it.
This novel made my day, I hope it gets picked, and the plot becomes more and more better.It is pure comedy and a good stress reliever, at least till chap 20.Now let's hope it gets picked.