AsmodeusPrime
I really like your story! I also liked how you outlined it. It’s very creative! Keep working and updating because I am here for you! Good job author!
Its good! keep on going marian! its gonna be great! (you should have one character die off at one part of the book) I HOEP THERE W ILL BE A SEQUEL!
This is a fantastic story! Good plot points, rich well defined characters that i care about almost from the very beginning, and excellent world building make this a very enjoyable and satisfying read. I was drawn into the story from the very first chapter! As a fan of this genre i find this story very original and refreshing unlike many others that all seem to draw from the same tired wells of insperation 10/10 would reccomend and i cant wait to read more works from this author because WOW, JUST WOW!!
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Only 5 chapters in and I could say this story has a lot of foreshadowing events. The lore itself is great as its a combination of a cultivation novel and a sci-fi novel, which I both love. The author also likes to elaborate on explanations which makes the world very real. Totally recommend.
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My favourite out of all the new trials. It is not the greatest or original story but i like the story. Also, i like it that the author took time developong the story and did not rush it much.
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Long time ago,there was a gray magic castle in the monster town.One day,the old brother Monkey and the young brother mankey were going to the gray magic castle ,they wanted to know what was in the castle.At morning,they met at star park and they had a lot of things to take.They had a big baseball bat to take,because if some bad people fight them they can use that to hit them.They had a camera to take some pictures for the castle.They had a torch to see in the dark and they bring some water and food.After twenty minutes,they were in front of the castle.They wanted to go to the castle at night so nobody will find them.At ten o’clock,they went to the castle,but they saw there were a lot of robbers in the castle,so they had to wait and wait.
I hope this gets picked Looks a lot better then that last novel ‘The Entire Mankind is Acting As Me, I Shall Secretly Build a Battleship and Shock the World’
Same World Background and Storyline as Era of Castles: Starting with 99 Dragon Eggs. If you are the type of person that likes reading formula novels (like certain Romance genre novels) centered on different MCs and this game genre is good for you then enjoy. Otherwise only read one of the 2 books!Personally I like the story enough that I'm going to continue reading both up to at least chapter 60 before deciding if which one I like better, assuming they get those chapters. Era of Castles is in the vote page now, so it will eventually pass. But at least one book I wanted to read has passed the vote and then stopped at 55/55 chapters without explanation, so I'm not very confident that passing the vote matters much.
I really like the storyline ???although it’s still not finished. And the way that he was willing to die just to save his brother was so cool?!
