The Man Who Killed the First Monster

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the story was ok at first but then mc starts to have negative iq and retardation syndrome around ch 45 and 52 which pretty much ruin the story via author forcing situations that is uncharacteristic of the mc which only leads me to think its beta mc and dummy mc furthermore when mc is in building he doesn't even make smart decisions like why would he now think about his status screen first omg i don't wanna think about more things that's wrong with the mc the more i think the more i realize was stupid things that he did in the story READ THIS IF YOU HAVE NOTHING ELSE *shrugs*

The world background and the writing style is good. The only negative point is the braindead foolish MC(i read till ch68 in royalroad). No one can be more irritatingly idiotic than this MC and if anyone is more idiotic then they will directly come under the mental illness category. He is so idiotic that he cant even realise the most obvious of things. The author might be making this MC a super idiot lucky b@stard for the progression of the plot but it will definitely lead to the failure of this good story. I hope he realises it soon corrects it. If he does that, this story will be the best. But this wouldnt have been a drawback if the author had named it "The  brainless fool that killled the first monster" or if he had said in the introduction that the MC will have some mental problems.

This story is pretty food but the updating doled and how short the chapters are makes it eh how do I put this aggravating buy everything else is pretty good

Up to chapter i read its good but dude pls name the chapters so it can make some people read it readily as not all people will try to read every novel in webnovel wish you dont discontinue and continue to write it wisely :)

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