Very good story. At the beginning a bit slow paced but gets better.
Writing quality and grammar are perfect.
Updates are stable until now, hope it stays like that.
Greating writing quality, chracters inportant In the story have good background witch explains In waYs easy to undertand author has steady updates I just feel like for the main chracter Nero he is so op but he doesnt act like hE has any power like when in the begining he can sense stuff far away but later he cant and like he couldve say someone and it was a little annoying
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your writing quality is very good. I like it very much. your synopsis is very eye catching . Seriously the first chapter got me hooked. keep it up and update more.
This novel started out interesting for me, but it became frustrating due to certain things, like the fact that his physique is the same despite the magic, and that it's hard to be told over and over again that he didn't have noticeable muscles every time a part was shown. his body, also incredibly annoying that they screw over and over and over again with the fact that he is a student, look, I have read novels with young protagonists and none of them were so heavy on the subject that he is very young, and it is basically always the Same, everything I just said happens a lot of times and also that many times the MC hits characters without any sense.
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its a nice one but please update it a little faster ?
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I had this book in my library for a little while. I finally click on it and see it says GreyBlueSparrow followed by a date. It’s on another one of your books too. I’ honestly pretty curious about that.
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