DreamLord14Oko
Story is still one of the best summoner novels I have read... It only loses a star in story development because recently the author has been interrupting arcs with some unrelated story which could have been told after that specific arc... And that kills the flow of the story...
For example there is a big fight but we cut to the fight/quest of unrelated side characters... Only to find out that they didn't add anything to that specific fight after it finishes which is kind of weird...
Great story, but one thing bothers me a lot. That is, the main character's kokugan. Don't you think 20 x speed is a bit too much? I mean there is literally no genkai that can ever hope to match it if MC can just blitz everything when he gets strong enough. Please nerf it, or add some backlash. I mean MC just goes 30 times faster than his original speed and just drains his chakra. If MC is as fast as Naruto in Boruto, then he can easily one shot every opponent so far. Just feels extremely unrealistic for a bloodline to be this op. Not to mention, if someone had the bloodline before him, then how is it still unknown?
Great story hope you can continue it.
I like it its good writing my favorite character is the god of reincarnation he sounds so chill and says sarcarstic things.Good job on the novel i cant wait for more chapters
Update or give the book to someone cause I really like it and want it to continue until its complete. Please don't let it die. I'll give you my free passes?
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So yes, here I am with my review of all the trial reads (will do one of this book too):
Same Day......(SDOL): Didn't bother reading.
I Can Transform Into A Zombie(ICTIAZ): According to the reviews, I deduced that the unwritten price for the transformation was the zombifying of MC's brain. Rotten.
My Debauched Devotion(MDD): Read it till the 40 chapters. I honestly like it, but in the last 8 chapters or so it felt like it was starting to lose it's uniqueness. Could be a false warning.
I'm Really Not Targeting The Mages: Even though I didn't finish reading the 40 chapters, I still got the idea of what it is. You can find a set logical rules in the novel. Rules that will not allow MC to fight higher level beings like cracking egg. It's not my fault if the author suddenly looses that logical screw in his head.
Dafeng's Night Squad: By the end 40 chapters, even though Dafeng's Night Squad has only show it's face twice (2nd time it was just a passing glance), it's still one of the best in this trial read. Sometimes action done by the MC feels a little impulsive on minor matters, it is mostly how a normal person would have acted (and by my 'Normal' it certainly, absolutely does not include certain webnovel readers, I appreciate your cooperation). Overall this novel has more realism than most Magical Realism novel out there(a reference to Chinese and Japanese novels).
I am Loaded With Passive Skills(IALWPS): help me find out whether it's Xin Fan's next novel after It’s Lonely to Be Invincible under a different name.
Tanky Mage System(TMS): *sigh* Didn't read it yet. Couldn't find the motivation to start it. About the review, No comment. Could have been good, could have been bad or just not my cup of tea? Those who have, help me with this.
The Treasure-Chest Hunting Vampire(TTCHV): Read the reviews then didn't trouble myself with clicking it's 'Read' button.
My Special Ability is Perfect Replication(SAPR): I have experienced enough betrayals to help my mood return to the chaos of origin after looking at the name. Reviews didn't help in brightening my mood.
The Era of Gods(TEOG): Not my cup of tea that's why was not able to finish the 40 chapters. But comparing it to other novels of similar plot and tags etc. I can at least say that it's decent enough that those who like this type of novel will read it. (Help me correct my mistake if I am wrong)
Fantasy Simulator(FS): Similar to Dimensional Codex. And I liked both. The basic outline is that the MC has a system that let's him experience the life in another identity in another world. I am being very crude with that description but I have faith in my brothers that they will be able to provide a better outline.
Starting with Contract Pets(SWCP): I believe there was novel in pervious trials with similar name and general plot line? A plus in my point is that the MC actively tries to learn knowledge and yes he cannot learn everything with a single look. I don't know why but it's just a plus in my opinion.
God Rank Upgrade System: Didn't bother finishing the second chapter.
I Just Won't Play By The Book(IJWPBTB): In the last month or two, this novel can become my best easily. Yeah, I know some of you think that this a beta novel etc. If I had read the reviews before reading the novel I might have taught the same. Let me clarify something, there is a reason for the MC's behavior and author used almost 10 chapters to clarify that (It's mostly the naïve days of MC at the starting shown as a back flash)
Now, this begs the question:
What I am doing?: Umm.......I don't know, you wouldn't happen to know, would you?
Why am I doing?: Just felt like doing it.
And why am I doing it here?: I guess because I liked it.
And yes, do recommend some novel that won't make me loss my brain cells.
Wonderful, just keep it up and try to increase the frequency of chapter release while maintaining size and quality ideas, I feel a great potential in your story.
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I just want to say while it's still early change the storage 'ring' cause when he grows up it's weird how a ring for a 5 yr old will still fit, sure magic and all that but it's weird, other than that the story's good
I think it's my first time seeing a sign in (cultivation) novel where mc isn't a thousand years old virgin, where are the raws though? Srsly
La historia es muy buena, el desarrollo del MC también mejoró mucho su carácter, lo unico si la emisión un poco deficiente pero bueno
Metaphorica and action mixed in perfection! The narration was at its finest and was a game maker in this novel. I am engrossed with a variety of words and my tongue feels like a poet dancing in the words whilst playing while I read. This is phenomenal, I got to read these kinds of novels to improve my vocabulary! Kudos! Quality at its finest!
