Escape From Paradise

The author managed to build a very solid world, the scenarios are well described, I was captivated by the author's writing style, the mystery surrounding the ML and how the stiry unfolds as I read more. So far my advice would be to try reducing some paragraphs.

Really good and creative. I love the writing style and language used in ch 1. Although the world building could use some work as I feel it’s more telling rather than showing (a good balance between the two still needs to be established), the story is fun and full of adventure

Good piece of writing. I'm hooked into reading this. It is carefully drafted and the synopsis is eye catching. Can't wait for more updates. Keep doing you.

The quality of the writing is very good, the author describes the scenarios very well. There was always a bit of mystery here and there that made me want to read more to see what would happen next.
The only thing that bothered me a little was the length of the paragraphs, but it depends from person to person, otherwise it was really good to me.

Your quality of writing and story development are magnificent, congratulations. The world background was also well crafted and masterfully developed.

Let me preface this with an apology. If I sound stunningly inarticulate at times in this review, I can't help it. My mind is completely fried.

I am still dipping my toes into the literally fiction pool, finding what works for me and what doesn’t. Books like these are definitely my cup of tea.

This book is like the dystopian Lord of the Rings, with its richly developed culture and economics

And also the supporting cast of characters is excellent.

Please update more author.