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I am really looking forward to this novel!
I don't know why it wasn't the editor's choice because I think it's better than I am a prodigy...
It is fast paced
Probably no harem
Mc is not dumb
Hope to see it being translated soon
I genuinely think that your novel is interesting. Although personally I found it too heavy, but it was also light at the same time.
I found some words are philosophical so it's really meaningful. The story development is also pace very well. Thanks for introducing this novel to me!
This book is fantastic!
I've only read through the first 12 chapters, but I can already tell that its got lots of potential.
The story is a very interesting take on quite a "cliche" idea. It isn't your typical 'generic' plot line where the one-sided MC aimlessly uses his powers in his quest for 'revenge' and manages to succeed at everything he tries.
Instead, the author creates a realistic and broken MC, whose character development is some of the best I've ever seen. As I read the story, the descriptive imagery and heartfelt language drew me into the character's shoes. I felt deeply immersed in the MC's emotional ups and downs. The story felt real.
At the same time, the plot line continued to intrigue me as I read. While the pacing begins quite slow, the author adds small details that create suspense and also give the opportunity for the plot line to go in many different directions.
I'm really looking forward to see where this story will head. Keep up the great work Author!
It is very fun to read story .
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It was an okay book in my opinion world building could’ve been better idk just didn’t seem like 5 stars but was a really good book I liked it
The plot and characters are well developed.The storytelling is also very interesting,it captures your attention as soon as you start reading it.
All in all I find this to be an immature wish fulfillment story that hardly if any actual worth. I recommend you avoid this story unless that's what you're looking for.
The other reviews don’t do this master piece justice. This is a top tier gem, it’s funny as fuxk and seriously reading it gives you goosebumps. I’m telling you the MC is hella scheming, this guy be playing all sort of grandpas and he has OP ability too. if u like smart mc that stays low-key while playing everyone like a dog then this is for you
It seems interesting Author.. ?? Waiting for more of this book❤️❤️ Waiting .. waiting... And ya , All the Best ... We are always there to support you.. ❤️❤️Love you .. ?
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Writing Quality 5Stability of Updating 5Story Development 5 Character Design 5World background 5Fantastic = action, romance, and drama, give them 100/100 each
So far this little story has some attention of mineMost novels only focus on the MC but this one like Overlord, it has deepth and backgrounds for side characters and the world itself I would like to have some suggestions such as adding things that other novels don’t so that it will make your novel stands out and unique Keep it up I will give you 2 stone per day
