okay, everyone reading this should just go and read the story already. I love this story, because it's written in a way that keeps my attention, and I end up binge reading a bunch of chapters at one go. I'm terrible at doing reviews, so just go and read it, okay?!
This novel, hear me you punks, this novel is an extremely fluffy romance novel that involves teasing and a bit of a twist to your traditional romance genre. btw it's a male Protagonist novel. It ticks all the boxes for me for a good romance novel. Try it, perhaps you may like it after reading so many hot blooded novels.
I love how the author made the flow of the story, I've learned some things because in some situation I can relate it in my life. There's some part that I didn't expect the flow of story, that's why my mind is full of excitement . Good job for the author, I'm still waiting for the next chapter!
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Good read so far. The update pacing is also good although the chapters are a bit on the small side.. ........................................
The grammer is bad but i like the story and his goal. I just hope Mc and Airin will be together forever and they will not betray each other.
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This is becoming hot garbage fast. The beginning was interesting, with a little bit of world building before going into the action. Then came the last 5 chapters, which were just the same chapters as those before but told from a different POV. The EXACT SAME. No new element unexpected.And I feel like this won't be the last time, so if you want to read, be prepared to skip a lot of chapters.Otherwise the TL quality is okay, some weird synthax but understandable.
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The mc background is decent, very knowledgeable army engineer with photographic memory reincarnating in the medieval era germany. This covers a lot of things like the inventions the mc will introduce to this parallel eart. Then plot armors all over the place. Deaf and blind castle servants, non existent bodyguards and castle guards, very trusty peasants, superspeed inventing and creation of steel products, etc. It was hilarious reading his surprise when he was informed that his concubine was pregnant, what do you expect when you do it every night. Reading about mc so smart and brilliant almost every chapter then he does the stupidiest of things. Needs a lot of improvement in plot building and character development. It would have been nice reading more detail about how he teaches recipes, invention building, army buildup and territory development.
Hello, I just wanted to everyone to give me their honest opinion, I just hope that this work would be able to impress some readers.
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