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It's the same kind of story than "Ocean survival" but i find it better for the moment. The mc is OP but not to OP like ocean survival.
It’s perfect theme that anyone can relate to especially with the current events that’s happening. The description of the scenes are clear and it has a good plot. Just take into account the words that will be too hard for some to understand. Still, good start author
Pretty good some details that me as a reader would like to have are skipped but has lots of potential. For example ( visuals are severely lacking about the Mc, his female partner, his weapons etc.)
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One thing I hate about someone who writes fanfic is leaving his work, I hope you're not one of them. for the whole story it's pretty good but it's a shame when I translate it into my language the translation is a bit lacking so please fix it. I hope this story is written to the end.
This book is well charactered with many different scenes that spike up my curiosity. The setting was designed so well that I could see the actual scene in my head. I wonder how you wrote such a magnificent book!
I have read a good amount of dragon novels but I have to say that this is one of if not my most favorite dragon mc novel! I wish you luck as you make this novel and have it become popular while I will constantly read and keep up with it and give power stones as well!
I think this story has a lot of potential and the writing quality keeps improving. The fight scenes are by far the best part of the book and well described. It’s almost as if you can see, what’s going on, in front of your inner eye.The story is a bit fast paced, but otherwise I don’t have anything to complain about. Keep up the good work.
I'm gonna be shameless and leave a review until I get a rating and don't need this anymore, anyways, the story is as described in the synopsis, also, you might be confused as to why things are unknown even after the prologue, it is intentional M. M is out
I would have to say, This is very Good, nice plot, a whole new experience like, come on, a world of the dead? Everything is on point, however there might be a few mistakes in phrases and punctuation, which bothers me a bit, but Everything is fine! Keep up the good work author! Im awaiting the next ones!
