good but author needs to improve of fight scenes like he said and well idk how to say this but umm expand the cast or whatever
( has just finished volume 1)
best novel I ever read I can't wait for another chapter.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
Honestly, hard to place this one. I've read 7 chapters and in that span, the MC has gone from unable to speak (a pretty cool handicap) to able to speak. MC got a great power which he wants to keep secret for good reasons, but then a chapter later thinks poorly of other characters who got a similar ability and kept it secret. MC wants to be powerful, but also wants to leave his destiny to fate instead of trying to get stronger on his own. MC wants to be careful, but then does risky stuff and almost dies several times for no reason. If the author would choose something and stick with it, this *could* have been an interesting novel. This wishy washy stuff doesn't work for me, unfortunately.
Review @ 85 ch:It is a slow easy going novel that talkes about a dad raising his kids, also the growth speed of the kids is a little stalled, it is expected since the world building itself is slow. The daughters actions are not that lame as it is stated. It is quite a good read that can really scale into a really nice thing to read.Spoiler down.. ......The things that causes the story to have potential are the following:System, daughters physic, who is their mother, and how will these kids develop.Things that are missing:Mc background, what he did when he arrived, what are the bounties he got, what is his physic.
This is a typical trash system novel. Basically everything is just plain absurd. He gets $50M for driving one person to their destination, and basically every reward is just too stupid. For anyone writing this type of story I personally think that the stupidest reward a 'system' can give is ownership of a company.
Only read 2 chapters. What a pity.It's a breath of fresh air that the mc became the attacker/invader in this novel but the mc also has a 100 crit modifier. So every item he picks up has an insanely high chance of getting the crit modifier.So his throwing spear or smth becomes an overpowered shuriken. His ragged chainmail becomes a fully plated armor. These things just ruins the novel. The mc doesn't do anything himself.Also, very small spoiler alert. The mc first raid is on a guy with a SSS-rank item which lets everything evolve as long you have enough experience. Which, means probably that the mc will acquire that item and evolve himself, instead evolving normally after battle or reaching certain conditions.Read at your own risk.
The idea of this story is inspired from the card games anime like YUGI but you’ ve changed a lot of details and you added your background which make it original i like your writing skills you use good grammar and easy vocabulary which make it easy to read i enjoyed it
Although it is not my type of story, it was very well written. I read 2 chapters only and didn't hook, but it really is because I don't like this type of story. The plot has a lot of potential from what I read, and the mystery will keep most readers on the edge of their seat, waiting for more :)
story is interesting and plot is also nice ???
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