The plot is astonishing, and the characters and the situations have been written very well, This book is full of surprises! Good work author! Best of luck
Loving the story please keep it going man
Everything sucks as if your first fifty chapters suck than how in the world are you gonna get readers. Writing style sucks, word arrangement sucks, don't know english, don't know how to or whete to use prepositions. Total **** story.
I liked how I was discovered at the very first moment. Even if there are a few minor grammatical faults here and there, they may be overlooked or addressed afterward. I'll continue reading since I like the book. Keep up the excellent job. I want to praise the way your tale evolved.
Writing Quality -- Between MTL and human, somewhat edible for the eyes
updates ehhh
Story development -- we are stuck in the school for ...well everything that is out from what i read and heard other people talking about online
character design -- this dude does a complete 180, turns from killing people to letting enemies live when they try to kill him over and over and are still trying BECAUSE I'M NOAH!!!! and turns into a simp out of nowhere when we believed him to be cold
background -- we haven't really seen anything or heard much about the world
Love reading this book, Very interesting plot, recommend this book to all readers, will be waiting for the next chapter
This was an amazing read! I love how the world (setting) was slowly brought into the picture, along with the technology, the crystals, etc. Although I don’t typically read this genre, this was incredibly written. Though there are occasional typos and grammar mistakes, it doesn’t decrease the quality of the writing whatsoever.
Keep it up!
the story's really good and doesn't fall short at all compared to the authors' other stories, and my personal little favorite where the authors note at the end of the chapters as they were actually funny for once on this app, keep up the good work brotha ?
Great start of the story and I hope for more chapters ?
More world building.Longer chapters.You will improve the longer you keep writing
Thank you everyone for your patience, this book is reviewed and completed. This is the second book in my story Revelations@end of the world. The third book, Conjurer@end of the world, will continue being uploaded here in the second book(For algo purposes) The third book will be released as a separate book soon, also free to read.Both the first and third book are free to read. They can be read independently from the other books if you wish. I've put in information and backstory to explain the missing plots from the previous book.
This is the story of a poor young man whose poverty even shreds apart their family willing to climb his way through society and into the top.