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You know, I've read so many novels on this site but I don't think I have read one that had something to do with pure construction. So I'm waiting for this to be released.
I like the story I find it interesting. The sentence structure is not bad. The characters and background world building is good also......
Story was good until it turned into the typical mc who only saves girls and get angry over his own people trying to kill a girl that would have killed all of them if she have the power. Overalll you will just keep getting angry reading this. It’s a good novel but I won’t recommend it
i really appreciate this story plot,thank you for creating this novel has interesting characters it's the first time I've read a story about an NPC as main character like this one and I'm enjoying it.The MC is funny with his learning about his world,the way only one person knows the truth it's better as the MC is staying a mysterious NPC/PLAYER so it's great. I'm quite impatient for new updates and hope the future chapters will continue to impress me .
Please keep this.....
Please release this......
Do not change this one to other novels that has to difficult words.....
Release.... Choose this..... Please.....
You've got to give this a try it is great even though it is a mmorpg but is has a supernatural feel to it MC is someone who was ranked +100 globally and one of the best 10 swordman players however because he got the sacred tatoo je was hunted in Real life and the everyone is basically like a superhuman since the game enhance their real life body and synchronize it with their in game avatar, and since we all go by the mentality of why the f,uck will I give you what is mine he commits suicide but his memories or soul get sent back to 7 years before the event I think when the game was about to get launched. And I am pretty sure his reincarnation is caused by the sacred tatoo
Not a bad story. I enjoyed most of the parts and the pacing was okay.
Some sentences could be better with and edit and maybe proofreading can help too.
Overall, not a bad read, and hopefully the author would improve it.
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the story is actually good, you can look at my other reviews, i am very critical when it comes to novels. is it the best? no! is it bad? again no! the start is very vague and could have been done a little better BUT wit that being said, the author explains things as you go along and by the time he enrolls into the academy and establishes himself a little bit, things are most explained and he is in a solid position. by the end of these 60 chapters, it becomes a solidly enjoyable story.
and the character should get fleshed out more but clearly, this story is made for the long run and the author is taking his time, we are just 60 chapters in and things are barely getting started as in fleshing them out BUT there is action.
it's not a super ingenious story but it won't get you disappointed yet it will probably not be in your top 5 list
hope this helped. also just as a final point to comment on other comments here, not every MC has to be a reincarnated person to act a certain way. they say he acts as a modern person just cuz what? he doesn't kill the 9 generations of anybody who looks at him wrong? bro, we don't even know if he would do that yet, he just established a bit of power. as for acting as a modern person, we still don't know where he came from, it was hinted that his family isn't a nobody family so who knows how that place is.
I've only read 21 chaps so far and I've been enjoying it the world setting is is very similar to Dark blood age but completely different ability system and the mc actually has a brain
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