It's an amazing story with an exciting plot. Read the story of a girl who was reborn and lives her life again. Hope you people will like the story
This is one of my favorite novels but it only has one fault and it is the author barely updates it. It really sucks because to me this book is a 10/10. The character developments is the best ive ever seen and you would also end up loving this novel. But when you end up up to the latest chapters you start to forget all about it.
I give you my support here, the start is really interesting and well written, keep going it's a good work you are doing with this story, it has potential and I'm sure that it will improve as it will be released :)
There's a lot of intrigue specially in politics in this story, and totally action overload that definitely was described well. The action mixed with love story makes it really great.
Love this. Too funny. The system is a troll. I need moarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Good Great Amazing Fantastic Fascinating
Good Great Amazing Fantastic Fascinating
Good Great Amazing Fantastic Fascinating
Good Great Amazing Fantastic Fascinating
So far, I've really enjoyed the story. The one thing I wish people wouldn't do is post comments like "omg mc so returded" or "why dont you try dis!!1!1!!!". It's really annoying considering that while the MC is kinda dumb, compared to this generation now, I swear he's a prodigious genius.
I give this novel an overall rating of 5 perfect star.. You know why? Cause while I've been readingthis novel I really felt the feelings that it want to express.. I laughed, I cried, I've been excited with their adventure, I felt suspense, I've been scared for the characters.. I sometimes think it's complicated with the love stories... Hahaha... I really enjoy experiencing mixed emotions...
The first chapter gives out as little as possible and it pulls you in and keeps you interested to read on more and more.
I feel like it's a bit early for me to say anything about the character but I have a feeling that I'll end up liking the MC. Just a gut feeling.
Amazing writing, amazing story, and world-building is just *chef's kiss.*
Good luck to the author!
Grammar mistakes aside, I think this story is definitely worth your time. Rarely have I been so drawn into a novel that I read the whole thing before I realized it. The Author has a mastery over pacing and exposition, and they make use of this to keep the reader immersed in a way that feels natural.
I like the way you use the system, and it reminds me of a few mangas that I've read in my time. I do truly hope that you continue with this amazing work, Author, as I look forward to reading more!
If you’re looking to read a game novel, this ain’t it chief. Honestly, when I was reading this novel, it seemed like the author just woke up one day after a long night of partying, hungover and still a bit drowsy. A lightbulb suddenly lit up in their head, their brain was telling them, ‘Hey! Why don’t you write a novel, a game novel’. And so they did, they slowly got up from the cold hard floor littered with red plastic cups and empty beer bottles, dragging their body over to their computer, they started to type away, completely unaware of the bits of mysterious white powder covering the area around their nose.
They started by writing down whatever cliches they could think of, and they made the protagonist and the antagonists while they were at it. The protagonist is fine for the most part, but the antagonists are on another level of stupid, as if the only thought in their mind is steal and loot gear, basically just throw-away villains.
So then the author kept clacking away on their keyboard with their fingers coated with a nice layer of cheeto dust. Still hungover, the author couldn’t think clearly at all, their head was throbbing so using their arms as a pillow, they slowly relaxed and drifted off to the land of dreams.
In there, they saw a mini version of themselves holding a mini shovel. The mini author begin to dig holes in the feild that was labled ‘the plot’. And after digging god knows how many holes, the mini author left and came back shortly after, this time holding a few signs in their hands. They planted the signs near the holes, one for each, and marked them as ‘plot hole 1’, ‘plot hole 2’, ‘plot hole 3’ and so on.
The author then woke up and after adding a few more details to their novel, they slowly admired it, thinking to themselves, ‘Boy have I created a masterpiece’, then promptly hit ‘publish’.
Thank you for such a great piece of work..
Don't drop and continue churning out this masterpiece.