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Also be aware that the mc of this novel will spare every girl that she fight, like every girl. Hell spare them because their beautiful, and he said so himself soooo, dont waste your time
After reading so many novels I got one conclusion only even if the GOD is best and kindest the religious will always be most greedy and damned. They justify everything wrong with god's will and grace and play with the feeling of loss and help.
I don't like it when the writer portray the womans'(in the plot) character unreasonable...
Great start, a bit generic but we come to this genre for this so it's okay, I like the baby start better but can't have everything. I think I'll have a good time with this one
Honest opinion, this story is surprisingly very well made. This sort of topic of being the first cultivator is usually written badly but this has done an amazing job, along with world or universe development. The story is very interesting and isn't just stale, it usually chages topics every few chapters, such as doing cultivation for 2 chapters then maybe working on upgrading his forging or alchemy skills. If you are interested is cultivation stories I would full heartedly recommend this, it's also a great introduction to what cultivation is!
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for everyone who wants to read the MTL: Eternals of the Wizarding World. .............................................................................................
Can someone for the love of god tell me other stories like this? Where does the protagonist create a gang or cartel that becomes as powerful as the army?
Honestly it's kinda boring. Typical "being an animal and eating other animals to evolve" plot, except the MC has so many cheats (time travel, system, getting the abilities of the animals he kills), that there's basically never any real tension.
this is a copy paste of a horrible story, making it just as bad., the MC is super Dumb, every single character in the entire story is extremly stupid beyond logic.
the characters have no development or growth which makes no sense, teenagers experiencing an entire lifetime of reincarnation without any change or growth in their psyche still behaving the same and thinking the same before which makes no sense at all. characters constantly condradict themselves and forget basic knowledge and common sense that they already know which also makes no sense.
the author clearly did not bother spending any time or effort into writing the story.
A compelling plot with great translation quality.
The MC is aloof and intelligent in handling situations using his prior experiences in the game.
Looking forward to more released chapters!!
I dunno if it's just because I've read too much stories...bur I found this plot too typical.
The characters seems to have no distinction and while the writing itself is not bad and it is stable, there are no particular part that make it different than the other similar stories. The emotional part of characters are simply not there... Like when MC got his past lifes memories, he should have more reaction to it such as fear, shock, confusion, and who am I? Ren? Or am I *blah past lifes names*? And, another thing is even when he accept the past lifes memories, if a child got memories out of nowhere they will be influenced by it. It will create trouble. The personalities of his past lifes will not be easily resolved like you seemingly written.
