Another copy-paste novel not sure whether i should read this or not.......
If i could give this 0 stars i would do that, but i cant.. basicly the mc is an asshole.. barely have the story started and he tells a partient, some bad things, cant totally remember what he said.. but think it was something like he is inhuman, and that he should just die or something like that.. and said that because the partient dosent care about hurting human over his love for music.. and then in like the same or next chapter the mc goes and f!ck other mens wifes.. of all the people in that institution, i would say that the partients with the numbers seems more sane then the rest!... i didnt get far at all.. so some might say this isent a fair review.. i dont really care.. i dropped this sh!t after chapter 3 or 4.. yes it was that bad!..
First review was removed. Otherwise this novel reminds me of HSA or HN1F. High hopes for anything that involves sect development, hard to find any good ones
Besides the unstable updates it was a good read and i can't wait for the updates to come, like the new chapters and keep it up. The warning mentioned seem excessive but it makes sense considering what's in it.
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I don't know what his novel is all about, but, Nice.
. .... ....... ... .... .... ..... ...... .. .. .. .. ... ... ...... ... .. ... .. .... .. Not Morse code just needed a minimum amount of characters... So if this says I'm planning to bomb the white house don't mind it
I have read up to 7 chapters and now I am stopping, because I am losing interest to further read it.
What i liked:
- I find the going out to space interesting
- I like the beginning where it starts with the MC's everyday life
What i don't like:
- Snail-like progress. Up to chapter 7, only one day has passed in story time(30 days have to pass so the MC goes finally into space)
- Too much irrelevant information which, for me, is everything that has no direct relevance to the mc and current or near events of the plot. It is distracting and destroys the reading flow. Example: In chapter 5 the author wrote a whole paragraph about citizens always nit-picking at the government. Then the MC observes complaining people while queueing. That's it. What is the point of this paragraph? I see no relevance for the plot, MC or me, the reader.
While some of that information is world building information, I consider that irrelevant because it has no direct relationship with the MC like he interacts with it or sees it while doing his tasks. And it is uninteresting for the reader knowing that all that information is useless once they go to space. Quite frankly, it feels like infodumping, just not in one go but in bits.
Webnovel needs more writers like you, you made me cry and it takes a lot out of someone to make me cry. The synopsis is on point it takes a lot out of a father to do what Matthew did and your vocabulary is on key so keep up the good work!!!
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A new system everyday got dropped and they gave us garbage like this. I really don't get it. That novel had supporters and views too and webnovel still dropped it.
I give this novel 2,5 rating based on the first few chapters.
Ceritanya menarik... Cerita yang sederhana tapi bagus
Oh my god what a story ! I just liked all the words in the story and if I want to say specifically it has so many English terms that I don't know