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This novel is interesting. I have red same type of novel once and it was fun reading it. I also tried it on MTL and found it to my taste. But its not same for all. Its for those that are tired of reading so much novel on struggle, fights, blood, etc and want to take a breather and try something new. Its a straight forward novel with a smart and low-key MC who is cultivating and eventually becomes super strong. Just hope translation is good enough for good read. Good Luck!!
Thanks for the hard Work ? Thanks for the hard Work ? Thanks for the hard Work ? Thanks for the hard Work ? Thanks for the hard Work ?!
This was an enjoyable read!Some of the scenes hold solid humour, and the story seems to be developing rather quickly. The relationship between the two main characters and their home life was established quickly, which made their reactions to their circumstances further on realistic to the matter at hand. The writing could use some work. Oftentimes, it swaps from present to past tense, especially in descriptions and dialogue tags. This can be read over though, and the writing is easy to read. I like how quick the story is developing, and the system seems interesting as well. This book looks open to opportunity!
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I am seriously hooked! The intriguing premise and execution of this story makes it so addictive to read. I love the characters, the tension and suspense. Can't wait to read more!
Me gustó la novela, pero aveces salta mucho en los hechos y hay que releerlo para comprender bien algunos hechos, ojala suban los siguientes capítulos pronto
The concept is Interesting, but doesn't write the story for you. This will be a lot of work beyond controlling various diseases. Unless you can characterize the diseases so they become an integral part of the story.Also, this concept has 50% more potential if you can make diseases from the symbiotic bacteria that support and help the larger lifeform they inhabit, and turn them into your Support Pet that gives permanent buffs.The concept has another degree of potential if you can make layered disease arrays. The idea is to have your probiotic buff colony help control your disease attack colony, taking a lot of the pressure off of you to directly control each instance of your Diseases. With these formations and systems of Diseases, you can recruit and reward allies in addition to tearing down individuals. And it makes surgical strikes possible, rather than just being a Plague Bearer Demon Lord.
Here is my review after more than 170 chapters:
My subjective opinion: I will cut this one short. The novel is excellent, and I will read it till the end. The author takes the effort with every update, and you can see that he cares about the readers. There is only one negative thing about the novel: the writing quality.
Writing Quality: Annoying to read. Why? The author doesn't care about the numbers and sometimes uses the Indian metric system, which is a grave mistake. The math is so wrong sometimes. Oh boy. The chapters are also claimed to be edited, but I still see a lot of grammatical errors such as typos like theives instead of thieves and such.
Update Stability: Excellent. 2, sometimes three chapters a day. The author delivers on the bonus chapter promises and is consistent.
Story Development: It is not unique; however, the author cares about the story. The characters have personalities and backgrounds. The story is easy to follow, and you won't find many plot holes. The story concentrates mainly on the game, but the real-life part is just as enjoyable. In short: The story will keep you interested.
Characters Design: Maybe the best part of this novel. Well thought out deep characters with easy-to-remember background stories.
World Background: Getting more complex as the chapters go. The gaming world of omega is very deep and still mostly unexplored. There is a lot of foreshadowing about the other races, strong NPC's, and the past.
The real-life is mainly focused around the characters and not built up. Countries such as country P country J country X and six trillionaires rule this world. We get to know more about MC and his family. You can also smell romance in the air.
Afterword: The story starts just like every other VRMMO story, but the author got hooked and built his own world. I thoroughly enjoy every chapter, and this is the first-ever novel where I dumped all my coins.
my only complaint is that the main character, a reincarnated 18 year old, acts as if he's mentally 2 years old near the beginning of the novel, which is rather frustrating. other than that, it's pretty solid.
Don’t waste your time on this novel. Right from chapter 8 the mc became brain dead. Despite transmigrating and living in this world for 5 years he just acts like he just got transmigrated and doing things like a noobie. I thought this novel would be different from the others but it is indeed worse because it makes you think it’s different but later on looks at you like a fool. Hope this doesn’t get picked and other novels with better potential does.
The novel has good Grammar and only minor mistakes. The idea for it is very unique and interesting. I was instanly hooked and cant wait for more to be released.
very good, best novel I've ever seen, please continue author. EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP.
