This is really nice to read, even though I'm halfway through it. The writing style is easy to understand, love it! keep up the good work, author!
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Gracias por escribir la historia pero es muy poco. espero q escribas mas la historia saludod
hey, are you into blood, guts, and gore. Does mass murder excite you. If it does, please seek professional help. If not good, still read this book.
I've read only 4-5 chapters yet So don't know where the story is going
I liked it but dear author what's with the pointless and needless use of Japanese words/verbs the totally make the story feel out of place
With a mediaeval western world building use of Japanese words makes me feel awkward while reading especially the use of word seishin or whatever which is important part of the world's power system As a non-japanese reader who completely doesn't understand the words' meaning it makes me turn my back on the story
I really hope you can change the use of Japanese words with more familiar English words or atleast translate those words into English
Interesting plot and theme! A refreshing take on the story and the narration is lively and so are the expressions! Looking forward to read some more future updates to come
There is a story here, its just hard to find it. The writing is erratic, there are absolutely no transitions from one scene to another and some details of the world are very counterintuitive. If each chapter of this novel was turned into two and the pace was slowed down this could be quite something.
Since the Author seems to be active, please do tell if you want me to elaborate on something.
Don't bother reading this, it's the same cultivation novels template with boring cultivation system and world building, the main character is just plain stupid, the grammar is so bad that you lose brain cells every paragraph, the system is just terrible and annoying, what a great idea to make the one thing that will appear in almost every chapter extremely annoying, and why does it punish the main character every time he swears? Did the author really think that's interesting?I can go on and on just read at your own risk of losing brain cells.
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The start is dynamic and attractive, while usually, the norm is to write in the past tense author had chosen to use present but it's not a bad thing per se.
Character design is unique and genuine in my opinion.
there is no information dumping and the story flows appropriately which is good.
Updates are stable enough that readers don't have to wait.
the only flaw I found in the narration is that it is tough to read conversations because there is no gap between them and it leads to confusion about who is saying what and which part is said and which part is not.
I think it can be corrected easily so it's not a big issue.
good luck for the author.
No matter how acceptable MC is, when 90% of the text are praises to MC money and possessions it's really not worth it. It's one thing when Sign In allows MC to be cool, it's entirely another when Sign In is cool and MC is simply attached to it.