What is Huxia?
Author or translator, if You write a story in English, Spanish, Portuguese and French; kindly use English, Spanish, Portuguese and/or French names. Using Chinese names is unpleasant, confusing, difficult to read and remember; for example: Lian Shung Tiaxang went to ask for some apples, she told him that Leam Shang Taoxeng only has peaches.
A good novel, quite enjoyable. Though I gotta say, the novels I like rarely get picked up.
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A good novel, quite enjoyable. Though I gotta say, the novels I like rarely get picked up.
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A good novel, quite enjoyable. Though I gotta say, the novels I like rarely get picked up.
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A good novel, quite enjoyable. Though I gotta say, the novels I like rarely get picked up.
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If like cute interactions between an mc who is not just a cardboard cutout and cute creatures, this is for you.
there are many monster taming type books in this site but few in not none where the characters of the creature/monster/spirit themselves are so fleshed out. Maybe only monster evolution.
And this novel is not about catching one monster than moving onto the next or just another generic xianxia with monster taming as a skin.
This novel is truly about the creatures and their human partners.
The interaction is so cute and more importantly, somewhat realistic.
The moves and logic of the power system actually adheres to the rules set by the author.
He does not pull crap out of his ass to give the mc bull**** power ups. Of course the mc has a cheat. But even with that the progression of the mc feels really natural.
I suggest you all vote for this one after giving it a read. Hope it gets selected.
I am just not able to read it. I find it way too boring and classic. It's a Chinese novel about a guy who cultivates...Have I spoiled you too much?
The story is pretty good so far, I've only read 40 chapters at the time of this review. The mc acts as he was portrayed to be in the introduction so there are no problems there. The world background and grammar usage are pretty solid as well, nothing crazy but it is good.
My main gripe with this novel is the way the author handles time skips. Time skips are a staple of the cultivation genre so its pretty much expected that there will be some, the problem though is that when time skips happen in this story it feels like time only moved forward for the mc. Ex: Mc does something that would create trouble for the country he was in and flees to another country. While in country number 2 there is a time skip of several years after which mc returns to country 1. None of the consequences of the mcs actions at country 1 have played out during the time skip, but after mcs return the consequences suddenly start playing out.
Personally I think the author needs to look at how he handled these time skips and correct his handling of them at least with whatever time skips come later. If possible I would suggest he goes back and edits the early chapters and make a couple changes to the story so it doesn't seem like things only happen when the mc is around. I'm not saying that he can't only focus on the mcs perspective because there isn't anything wrong with that, just that things should be able to progress even when he isn't physically present.
I've read the translated raws, although currently there's only 129, it's pretty good!
A trash version of Digging to Survive: I can see Hints.
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why don't you keep writing
An interesting story. The story is quite reminiscent of other game stories and the world building seems pretty good so far. The character design is also quite fun as he seems goofy but smart. But he seems too smart, as if he knows everything.
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