Five Star support
Five Star support
Five Star support
Five Star support
Five Star support
Five Star support
Five Star support
Five Star support
Writing quality not bad
Story is slow paced with little to to much scheming.
World background unknown only that there's mages and humans and a capital city.
The Mc's character is not bad we haven't got any glimpse of his rational behavior or coldness but he's a deep schemer too.
20 chapter of nothing but unrelated information that's even more confusing no action or magic or a single spell nothing just probabilities of solving a rubric cubes.
It's not interesting there's nothing wow yet that'll keep readers wanting more.
Ps his cheat look similar to LOHP.
let me comment my tags for this book
-humor
-OP MC (he's not really that strong but...)
-Master - Disciple relationship
- Dangerous Girls
- Another powerful and dangerous heroines
- yandere master?
- did I already mention how dangerous they are? haha well Goodluck MC I'll pray for your soul.
I find the idea of the system interesting. The MC's personality is fun, apparently it's liberal to have more than one woman, but he has a maximum limit of 10 women or is subject to a fine.
MC loves to read, and even when he walks he is reading, and because of that, he earns money and can evolve the system through reading.
For me it's been a fun experience, if you have time, give it a try too.
Well done to the author. Your writing style is different and lovely to read, however it has the potential to reach more readers and admirers. The author adopts an inconsistent approach to grammar and punctuation and would benefit from spacing out their moments of dialogue to provide an even powerful impact.
please pick it up and keep writing or translate it till the end in pure English
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he story starts off quite well.
i hope the other people besides main and side characters will have more "color" as they seem bland and well they don't even have names. the main character is also very bland. we only know his name and background. we don't know how tall he is, what is the color of his hair or eyes or what kind of face structure he has.
the background of the world seems interesting and i hope there will be chapter to explain more how the universe and galaxies are structured and how they are connected to the other realms/plains.
the only really bad and annoying part of the novel is that the writing quality is bad and the writer isn't consistent with the story. in the realm where the mc fights the insects he somehow had a wooden spear. there was no explanation how he got it and next he found a blade from a dead guy. first he calls it
"long knife" and then he calls it "long blade" the spirit of the mc is spear type and i hoped he could've just used the wooden spear, of course i understand that a blade made of metal is stronger but he had no idea how to fight with blade and he had instincts from his past life to help him fight with spear so the change of weapon didn't make much sense.
Writing Quality is one of the best in web novels!
The storyline is excellent and easy to understand.
There is a mystery, love-love, a lot of love that will make my eyes bleed in a good way, and also a good sense of cultivation and techniques
very much like the novel, so plzz write until the end and i will be with u in this journeyAnd i am your loyal reader??
Book was dropped. I wouldn't recommend starting this book until updates resume. I really enjoyed it prior to it being dropped. Plot wasnt overly deep but it was enjoyable. Characters were likeable. The world elements were nicely developed.
As it is a custom to give your novel five-star reviews. I'm giving it a five-star review.Oh how proud I feel.To give my novel a five star review.Oh since I am doing this, this meme should be appropriate.
FIRST I WANT TO SAY THIS NOVEL IS BETTER THEN 3/4 OF THE NOVELS THAT CURRENTLY OCCUPY THE TOP 10 lol[Now for my review]I love everything about this novel starting with the cool Alpha male MC who is good with women, the unique system the MC gets by pushing himself past his limits to protect who he loves, the fun atmosphere and different kinds of characters, a completely different world background compared to other novels ive read, also the harem members stay relevant and you get to see great character development, the mixture of slice of life/action/fantasy/romance/adventure/harem/R18 all meshed together perfectly, another thing I love is how the author didn't follow the trend of making his MC a bashful/dense/lame protagonist like a lot of mcs these days, The MC acts realistic the way he follows his desires protects those he loves and is heartless to his enemies. If I was forced to say anything negative it would be I wish the novel got more then one chapter a day because I can't get enough.