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There are things i like about this story and others I really don't like. Despite being modeled after your basic Wuxia novel, I like that AGB has a unique world with a pretty cool cultivation system,
However, my biggest gripe is with the MC. He's apparently 6 years old and thinks, talks and acts like an ***** but you've given no explanation for why that is. It's not like he's reincarnated. Also, the MC is plain dumb. He's made at least half a dozen bad decisions in first 5 chapters.
All in all this would be a much better read if the MC's character traits are ironed out.
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Are you really trying to copy " I'm a Qudrillonaire" thinking people wouldn't notice because you changed character names.....
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Nice work I like it very much.Not much to say but keep on doing the good work. Your current release is very stable. Just wish you could have more views for this original work
Wow! Simply astonishing, the world building and plot progression are amazing. It is obvious that the author has put in lots of hours editing and fine-tuning this series. The dialogue is easy to read and follow, which adds to the immersion of the story. Highly Recommend.
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I wish you don't make it sci-fi like that mad scientist though because that's kinda not my cup of tea.. Okay? Btw i like how it resembles that story cause it had stopped early because of authors sisters' wedding what not that took 6 months lol . I'm expecting a good novel out of this okay sooo good luck and thanks for your hardwork btw please don't dropped it cause that's the thing i hate.
Got attracted after reading synopsis then got engrossed after reading a few chapters
This book is amazing so try it out.
I can't really say anything, it's a fun read. I recommend it. I know I said I'll give a proper review, but I really can't say anything. It's a solid read.I didn't find any grammar errors that I can point out. The character, in my opinion, is nothing special, there was some development, nothing crazy.The world is nothing special, it's like real life.The story is decent, it was fast-paced, but not rushed, and you can follow it without a problem.Overall it's a decent, good read.
My honest thought when you write a new novel is whether I should invest my time on your new story or not. It is not because I do not like your writing it is because you will continue updating or not like you put your other work on hiatus. About this story I like it but you need to focus on the good editing of this book there are various mistakes. And I'm still waiting for when you will continue updating the Talent swallowing system.
There’s only a few chapters as of right now but it is already pretty interesting and I’m liking how the story is going so far. I also enjoy the main chracters so far. ???