"I felt I was flying. I was all over the place. It was good at first." he took a deep breath. "The dream was pleasant somehow. I could watch the trees and the creatures of our land. I spent so much time daydreaming in my own dream watching the clouds. It was so soothing and happy."
Looking at the quests, Jun sat there in deep thought. Before he could process anymore information, George suddenly appeared once again with a wooden tray of food with an amused look. Placing the tray in front of Jun, George patted Jun on the back and smiled. For a split second, a phantom vision of George's cold face with bloodied hair interposed on top of his smiling face.
"Yes, thank you."
"The f*ck is this?!" he lunged towards the mirror, his eyesight miraculously better. With his two hands on either side of the fragile glass, he couldn't help but to stare at the stranger before him. "Holy sh*t," he muttered. "Don't tell me I was really hit by a truck?" He took a step back before glancing down at himself. Then, he sighed.
- "Chewee, check the area"- Finn heard a familiar voice getting closer.
"Ah.... No! go ahead." Arthur answered and went back to his work.
"Sasuke, Naruto? You'll be last in line," Hisako said. "Between the fireballs and clones, you'll be able to cover our retreat back to our base in the village. Do you understand?"
The Core Guiding stage was one of the 3 main foundation building stages, most called it the initiation stages for becoming an elementalist. It was meant to strengthen your body for the later stages to come, using the flow of energy to fortify the bones.
“Release him? Go tell the person the Patriarch sent, that I will deal with this matter myself!”
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Author, I loved your story, it's obvious that there is potential, lots of potential, seeping from your novel. The only thing lacking is um, how do I say this? Ah yes, a narrative technique. It's evident from the synopsis that you lack a narrative technique. Please don't treat this as criticism, merely feedback to make your story even better! I love the concept, the worldbuilding, but the story could use some descriptions. For a beginning author, your writing is quite good, and I believe you should keep writing because practice makes perfect :) Good luck and kudos to you!
This is a very great fanfic, ive been reading it since day one and it never misses, yes its technically all smut but it also has plot. Keep up the good work author.