I've Got your back Author!!!!. I am super happy to see your story develop this much from when I last read it!!. I definitely need more of Marcus G Orno Thats for sure!.
From the beginning to the ending this book is filled with chaos. Plot: Very bad. Jumping from one style to another, no links between chapters, the only interest that i had “is the next chapter weirder?”.No description of world, characters. Tons of unnecessary text, a lot of holes in plot and, of course, the worst setting i have ever seen.
I really like this fanmade continuation of the original novel. I know that the writer has already stopped working on this, but as a reader and a genuine fan, I can only hope that if the writer sees this, you will contine to update this novel. It is a really selfish request but all I hope that, even as a hobby, you can finish this novel. Thank you!
Overall right when i read the sypnosis i knew that this was going to be interesting, i love how you add a little hint if humor from time to time, i also lovee everything about the princess. I enjoyed reading, i cant wait to see more :)
"I've died in every unimaginable way. But here I am, still alive." the man who is talking fixed the camera in front of his face. "I'm the last one here, and I don't think that my ability is a blessing anymore."
I love the character development, grammar, and spelling. I also love the fact that shin is a healer but am disappointed that he is slowly transforming into a cliche mc who is either a dual class or abandoning his healing for high combat power. Please understand, combat power isn't everything. I love shins uniqueness and that would disappear real fast if he continues this path. Every other wuxia novel has high combat power mcs, and they all become gods at the end. This novel has a chance to explore the political and social impacts of shin being a PURE healer, exploring the healing arts in greater depth and detail, as well as increasing its popularity by becoming a non cliche novel unlike every other novel. I admire your writing style, and if you are reading this I would like to tell you that your work is the best out of all the original novels I have read. Please don't let Shin's uniqueness disappear. It is the thing which sets him apart from other mc's who are all combat power hungry. let him become a pioneer, and make him a healer.
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This oneI found was very good and a decent one at that. Hope it maintain it quality till the middle of the story. ......................................
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The author has a +1 for me as i always love a good villain mc. so far i see this novel as one with great promise keep it up. hope there wont be to much faceslaping later
I love this kind of monster trainer romance and from the beginning this romance has remained good, I just think these newer posts have left something to be desired with other people's tournaments and duels, have been too many chapters and it seems like the MC became a bystander.It also seems that the author has forgotten the other 5 koi from MC, which I really hope to see them evolve.In addition, a slight development of the story is lacking as: because Wang Tao trusts Ye Qin so much that he had nothing special about two boys being bullied; even though I was short I wanted an explanation of why Tang Yaling knew it would lose to MC; and lastly, beware of the creation of new powers, such as those rings, which were very sudden and without explanation and development at all.By the way, I'm sorry for my writing, because I'm from Brazil and used Google Translate.