the story plot is good,but it feels like it's hurried. The dialogue can be written a little more well. it's kinda confusing
Not bad at all I liked the ending it was good should have continued a bit to it though but other than that I like it and completed the story
This is a good story that brings dungeons to a cultivation world, which I like the idea of seeing how the cultivators interact with the dungeons and seeing it grow. However, the story (at the time of writing this review) hasn't been updated in 4 months, and I don't know if the author has posted any updates if they intend to continue this story or not.
after reading till the latest chapter i can say for sure that this is worth the read once you reach chapter 120 were things are finally starting to get fire the grammar is good haven't seen any errors and everything can be understood the world building is good can't get enought and would love to read more if i could travel throught time to when the novel is done so i could binge read it
This novel is easy to read, chapters aren't so long and the narration are on point and descriptive. easy language is there and proper diaogues making me to connect. good work author keep it up
it is enjoyable to read.i personaly find myself reading this, so i can say that it is enjoyable as I read of it.indeed, only by reading it can you say it is ejoyable to read requested by Murphy_
Well this is the tenth review. So I figured out to write it down myself. I started this series with a goal in mind, to have fun and enjoy writing it. But midway thought an idea popped up my mind; why don't I turn it into a comic?And so I've done that :DThe comic is now released for free at webtoon. You can check it out if you want. I apologize for my delay in updating the past period, I was kinda busy with the comic thing.However as everything is settled then I can resume writing and publishing here with the same schedule I promised; two chapters per day.Hopefully you'll like the story :)Ranmaro
Unfortunately I had to drop it partly because of the premise of multiple MC's when there was only one that I gave a **** about which was the one that has the name of the novel the chaos butterfly I found myself skipping chapter after chapter when the other MC's were being focused on because they simply werent interesting. I almost forgot to mention that the other part is because the MC i did enjoy the Author admitted that her personality was going to change because of all the torture and bad things that happen to her so...Other MC's suck and the MC i like is going to break mentally and become darker and unlikable i know this because torture does not improve personalities it either breaks them or makes them worse/darker/meaner any other outcome is bull****
Don't drop this. I've been looking for a novel like this i give u five star review for this. Make a mass release if u can. I don't want to wait any longer.
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I like this novel, and hope the author just drop it like others. In the following hope the character of the mc get better and being able define himself his own authority and exerce more control over his ability to focus on what he need and discern what he don't. ??????????????????