TheUrbanimmortal
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This is one of the best novels I have read its only problem is the low chapter release so far I am only chapter 20 I hope the novel continues this way and please increase the number of words per chapter
The Novel is pretty exciting. I really love the personality of the mc. It gives him a Worldy and elegant temperament i think.I wonder how the story would go on? Thankyou for all the chapters!!??
A fantastic novel! I'm tired of each time I find a novel with a FMC she is in search of revenge, in love with the cold and bully MC, or simply having the problem of status. This novel is refreshing and don't have these cliches so I recommend it. Nice job author.
PS I only meant to get the chapter 9 before I mail it totally throw it on the back burner pretty muchanywho let's get back to the complaint part during chapter 9 when the main character figure out or saw or even when I honestly don't care care realized about injured now during the same heart and sing it just before they come in and they were talking about Boosie part and I stinky married to have the healing if you mix in with it why not he used to healing part similar same thing with the whole check out your belly now show your ability to the guy yes but it won't be impossible to use as a wake up you need besides all of that why not show your family and you order and I don't get it wrong when she yeah but when you want nothing to do the testing and special after showing him for him as a quote and quote farmer want to see the show him and his ability and you back to the story seriously what type of healing belly don't use that towards their family especially when they don't know and besides that why go out for a healing pot a little healing potion mind you never mind and Johnny might free or to begin with so how in the world he's going to explain how in the world and he got the potion with most likely a pretty expensive early not ask or to normal people in conclusion the main character they're pretty stupid ability that he has like it doesn't make any emotions we had to help or act like we you don't have that idea you just stupid am I so one more thing about the test what type of idiot only being very proudful and one skin only see a farmer I meant don't worry kids this week I will at least check check twice or even three times not just once and nearly assume he have a farmer telling that's it stupid my opinion that was mine and one reason I guess okay tomorrow there's mind you it on tonight bye
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Exceptional story, decent story building, though leaves much to imagination for now. An awesome story with a good amount of action and plot even though its tempo can be a a little mixed at times ( too fast, or just slow enough to feel frozen sometimes). Not gonna say too much as the story hasn't ended yet but this is a must read for those who want a good story without a template to follow like most novels out now.
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It is a good one the only problem is updating stability for a new novel updating 3-7 chapter a day is the norm but we'll you rule just increase the updating stability
I'm writing a review for the simple fact that you're novel is locked ? behind at chapter 20 where every book I've read lately is locked ? behind at chapter 40, where even then novels used to go up to 60 chapters before being locked, and going premium status. Anyway you got your self a nice novel.
The interesting thing here is the cheat power. Notably, one 'simplification' allows the MC to consume hot water instead of qi to cultivate a technique, which, wow, that's pretty cool. The worldbuilding is decent, and the novel is amusing.
I hope this gets picked. I like this type of novel and they're rare so PLEASE Webnovel, just for once, pick a novel that I actually like, It's getting kinda frustrating.
