Wow just wow. its been long since I read anything except fanfics but this is a nice change of pace
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I am surprised how good this is even when the MC can be a little creeper so time to time.
The world-building is nice, and the MC is solid. Overall, the book really gives off the vibe of another land, and it pretty much captures the surrealness of that said world. Just a minor tweak though, you can lessen the paragraph division so the readers won't be encouraged to skip through the dialogues. Adding a couple more words on a sentence said by a certain character will really help with engagement... not too much though since that would bore the readers.
I tend to in the opposite spectrum where I make all my paragraphs longer... and that's a bad habit I couldn't get out of my system. You're writing style is fresh, you just have to make it smoother.
An interesting read overall, definitely sticking around for more ^_^
Intriguing read, loved thing about it and honestly keeps me wanting more.
Awesome story.
Its something new for me actually but I am liking it. its pretty good and unique, filled wth mysteries dt I want to unveil. will keep on reading to see how Kai will embrace his new self?
Solo Leveling is amazing, however the author who created the sequel Solo Leveling Ragnarok is just as amazing. I sincerely hope that the author feels better soon and gets back into writing.
This is pure , unadulterated nonsense, whoever wrote this should feel sad. I gave up at chapter 4.It feels as if a chinese author wrote a chinese mc, then decided that the mc is from the west, even though everything is still chinese.Plot makes little to no sense, the style is garbage and I’m constantly wondering what is going on.
I have been waiting for him to establish his spiritual adobe for a long time, I already feel like quiting this novel after seeing all types of stupid plot deviations
just to weird for me I'm not into mommy love it just got to cringe I'm sorry. I couldn't continue. it could've been good but without the mommy thing. this story has no bright future in it I believe .
The writing is really good, the characters are decent. There are only 5 chaps currently but a pretty good novel so far.
It was fine in the beginning. The title caught my attention. Vigilantism was kind of interesting. I noticed that the author likes stories that has a little bit of violence in it, kind of an action theme because I have read her other book. But the genre of this story says Magical Realism. What does Magical Realism means because so far, I haven't ready anything in this book about magic. Haha. Any way, the story becomes interesting as I continue reading but the author only updates 1 or 2 chapters a day. I had to skip ready a couple of days because I like continuous reading as I hate cliffhanger. I hope the author will mass release. I would definitely enjoy it. ❤️❤️❤️❤️