it's kind of interesting more chapters please
average writing quality, average storytelling and just barely average translation quality. And for me the problem isn't related to that there are other novels with similar storylines, there are only so many stories that can be told and if someone does it better than I have no problems whatsoever that I have already read a similar story. And that is where the problem is with this story, I have read a similar story that was written much better. The storytelling was much better, there is a natural progression in strength increase and not sudden hikes, and things happen for a good reason. Characters are written well and they have good motives for their actions. All things that I have not found in this novel. And I haven't even spoken about the dodgy translations where I'm constantly thinking 'no the author couldn't have meant this? or could he?' (P.S. in my star evaluation I have filled in the updating stability as if it was translation quality)
interesante.
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Its a good concept, but its too simple. It has none of the expected complicated political structure in the palace. Characters are all quite flat, and the world is mostly unexplained. At least they told us the cultivations levels.
Question… is invayne really human?
Good story! But in my opinion, the mc is getting too strong to fast. Mc isn’t even getting used to his power. Without a good foundation, one is doom to fall. This isn’t the story for you if you don’t like story where mc suddenly get lucky and become really strong fast.
You would think that 4.5 rating and 180 chapter would make a great story, huh?
WRONG! Evry chapter doesn't have more than 500 words without the status,skill and quest information.
What's more, the status doesn't make any sense.
Very nice concept and an idea, however, the author totally wasted the whole thing after the first 20 chapters,
*I don't have many issues regarding the strict system because it is supposed to make MC a better academy master, So the strict quest and punishments make sense.
*What doesn't make sense is how illogically irresponsible MC is. Believe me it is not a lack of experience, it is just purely stupid. The only reason his students are alive is because of 100% pure luck(or lazy writing in this case).
*There are a lot of inconsistencies in the chapters.
Example:- How the heck did he forget that the girl he liked is dying because of a curse( Her uncle told that to his face in a previous chapter)?
Anyway doesn't worth the time, definitely not worth the money.
Nice book, it's not perfect but enjoyable. Most of the characters are well written and fleshed out, the system is kinda cliche after the reveal but it's expected. Overall, it's a nice read to while away time.
"I want to commit a suicide." -taken front the synopsis and I couldn't say it better myself. Ffhesggddddfhbb fhggggggfggggghhghhhhhh
"I want to commit a suicide." -taken front the synopsis and I couldn't say it better myself. Ffhesggddddfhbb fhggggggfggggghhghhhhhh
I like the novel. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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