Okay so I need to talk about this tunnel scene because it is EVERYTHING. Su Yundai is just sitting there smiling at her phone, completely oblivious, and Shang Beize is beside her just… dying inside. He wanted a hug too. He wasn't allowed to casually hug her or touch her shoulder blades, but Lin Yitang got that privilege. And then the car goes into the tunnel, everything goes dark, and she catches his reflection watching her—his gaze fixed on her shoulders, unreadable. The author writes: "like tuberose blooming at night, its petals milky white, its fragrance even richer after sunset." I literally gasped. That comparison is so specific, so sensual, and it completely captures Shang Beize's internal state—he's this cold, controlled man who is absolutely unraveling over her. And then he asks her the most pointed question: "Are you happy now? Will you still cry when you get home?" Like he knows she was crying earlier, like he's the one who saw her at her most vulnerable. The tension between them is unreal. He's jealous of Lin Yitang, he's possessive of Su Yundai, but he won't just… say anything. He makes her earn it. And she's so clueless about it all, just floating on her Tangsheng internship high. The love triangle isn't even a triangle anymore, it's more like a square with Wei Lin in the mix. And Wei Lin—oh my god, Wei Lin. "Just the two of us." On his knees. I'm not okay.
Okay so let me just say this: the scene where Fu Xinling finally apologizes to Fu Chuan is one of those moments that hits different because of everything that comes BEFORE it. She lowers her head, she apologizes first—which is HUGE for her character—yet her apology is so begrudging it actually hurts to read. And Fu Chuan? He just... leaves. No drama, no tears, no grateful response. Just cold, quiet indifference. That's what broke me. In the previous life, he probably begged for this moment. Now it means absolutely nothing to him. The narrative arc here is so satisfying because we're watching someone who spent his whole life trying to earn love finally realize he doesn't need to. And Fu Zichen? Oh man, the rebirth angle is doing double duty—he thinks he's outsmarting everyone by courting Qin Jian and getting close to Shen Shutang, but the reader knows better. We're sitting here watching him walk into his own humiliation. The plot twist of him being jealous of Fu Chuan, of ALL people, is genuinely funny. What an utterly ridiculous situation, right?
I was first loosing interst when i was reading chapter one but i was later hooked, didn't know why but i too was getting angry as i was reading it especially chapter 8?? all in all the story line is quite ok hope you keep onthe good work
this is a very entertaining novel but the lack of world information makes it less entertaining
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The story (upto ch 17) is very captivating, with little to no grammatical errors and competently written.The story flows well, so does the action, the worldbuilding is intriguing but could be explained a bit more, for eg. the different Realms where the gods reside and where they end up during the story. The names of the Gods and their respective domains and the supporting characters may be a bit tough to remember at first but it became easier as the story went onMy only real complaint is the relatively slow update schedule but all in all its a very good first book from the author and I'd highly recommend to future readers
Bruv, mc is the Cold Jade Beauty? I can’t stop laughing
I think the author needs to work on the world building, so that readers's can fully understand the setting. However, the plot looks exceptional and even though I've only read the initial part of this book, I can already tell that it is an amazing plot. I'm really curious to see how Grace lives as Prince Quicke? cause I'm sure it would be a trilling read.
hope u update it daily cuz i enjoy it so much
1. This story may seem humorous on the surface, as the main character, Jung, is a goofy guy, but the story is anything but silly.2. The pace is quick, especially at the beginning, but the world-building aspects are integrated into the story.3. Jung lived 12 different lives before the novel even begins, and we will explore all of them without info dumping. He will receive more than one archetype, but as the story will be a long-running one, I am not rushing it, even if the pace is quick in all other aspects.4. Taming is a humorous element of the story. Not only will players be tamed but also cats—though it will take some time to get there.5. We have a sentient system that can evolve and become more human-like. Her progression is a big factor in the story, and her situation is directly connected to how Jung can progress in this world.6. If you expect a perfect main character, your expectations won’t be met. Jung is flawed and has more than one motivation to thrive in a new world.7. My writing improves in each chapter, but if you come across mistakes, feel free to point them out.8. Bullying players and acting with fake and different identities is Jung’s hobby, which adds fun elements to the story.9. My suggestion is to read up to premium chapters and then decide if you want to keep reading. I say this because I am confident in the last free chapters, as they are well-planned with good execution. Believe me or check for yourself. They are pure fun.10. Bonus chapters on every 200 Power Stone or 50 Golden tickets. They will be released on Mondays, and I haven’t decided on an upper limit yet.11. No harem, but a sweet and somewhat unique romance. The cover image is not for the show. She is our best waifu. 12. Comments or any other interaction with the novel are appreciated.13. I am definitely forgetting something; I might add an auxiliary chapter.14. Stay hydrated, keep reading, and most importantly, Stay Silly.Let me know if you have more questions.
it's a lovely story I can see you becoming a great writer keep up the good work ?
I stumbled upon this ongoing WebNovel and I'm so glad I did! The author's updates are consistent and I always look forward to the next chapter. The world-building is incredibly detailed and immersive, and the characters are complex and multifaceted. With each chapter, the plot thickens and leaves me on the edge of my seat, eagerly anticipating what's to come. Even though the story isn't finished yet, I'm already invested in theoutcome and can't wait to see how it all ends.I highly recommend this WebNovel to anyone looking for a thrilling ongoing read!