Peerless Venerable

Hi Fallen Ghost!

I have to say that I am amazed with the storytelling style. Each chapter was packed with action and narration.
While one would expect the narration to be mere fillers, it actually contains in-depth details about this world of magicak kingdom where the story takes place.

Lindley the protagonist was a very cheerful and modestly happy guy at the beginning but things quickly took a dark turn right at the first chapter.

The story pace was amazing and engaging. The grammar and structures are impeccable. Readers who like magical medieval stories with magical beasts and leveling and system should definitely stop by!

Extremely well-written story, wonderful job!

I feel that this type of leveling system is really interesting. The subtle way that the author shows how the Mc living in a skill system world without too much distractment, it was only during the sleeping period that the system updates. Very interesting.

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Love the pace of the story and how he explains everything and not just a info dump first chapter. Author really knows how to set the pace of his story.

I have only just started reading and already I hope to see the character develop more with his system and read what he will do with it I hope you don't leave the system out too much.

Writing Quality five star
Stability of Updates five star
Story Development five star
Character Design five star
World Background five star .