He was about to fall into a comatose state but then suddenly, he felt the energy within Liuyun being easier to suppress. Noticing a foreign, yet ever so familiar energy helping him out... He knew it was Jia Yi helping him suppress the power and giving him the freedom to heal Liuyun.
It feels empty. It feels like the protagonist is maintaining a facade, as opposed to acting naturally. I also can't help but question the practicality of certain events. Posing as a khilman, a supposed battle hardened maniac, that... decided to randomly investigate the appearance of beasts? If the idea was to avoid suspicion why even think to bring up the issue at all, especially when the protagonist insists on using the area as a hunting ground? The actions are completely contradictory, then you have him perform acts of great foresight, as though he planned such intricacies. I don't want an idiotic protagonist, but making him senselessly intelligent will only question the validity of all his actions. Why doesn't he simply have a change of clothes? Why doesn't he enter and leave the town at more reasonable hours to avoid attention? Why doesn't he utilise his makeup kit to take on an appearance or conjure a back story that perhaps gives credence to his late night shenanigans. I'm sure there will be some rationale later on that will somehow justify these actions, but I can't really understand how he can appear so shortsighted.
Its a very good slow paced novel. I am usually not that much of a fan of low paced ones, but this one is just increadibly well written and very exiting to read. The story, worldbuilding and all that is very well done and I am exited to read more and see how the world builds along the story. I am also very exited to see how the uniquie mc with his uniquie strenghtes evolves. I really like the idea of fiting using formations as it is unlike most of the other cultivation novels I read before. There is no system what is also a + for me.The only negative thing I have to note about this novel is that the author/translator sometimes things that the mc is a girl. Id say in 1 out of 6 chapters the mc "becomes" a girl.Overall, its one of my top favorite novels out all the novels I read.
Mc being god in his zone destroys all the fun in it. I can imagine better things to to than him and it feels boring
very good bookmust read enjoyed very much
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Shameless self-review.I do hope everyone can enjoy this novel. Our MC will spend a lot of time on her own exploring and discovering things inside the MAZE. The idea is to mix some regular fantasy troupes with some slice of life, showing how is to actually live as someone who fights monsters and explore different places for a living.
wow ,the beginning is already so hooking ? great job author ?
This type of novel is something that i can share to my friends and buddies.. It's very exciting and it can make me contemplate for its hidden messages.. Thumbs up mr author!..
Honestly one of the best urban novels I've read. MC is spy material but same times it's also realistic. Spy genre on webnovel should be much bigger.
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