This narration style seems very realistic and it feels as if Dexter is sitting right in front of me telling me his story.The plotline is quite intriguing. I'm looking forward for the upcoming chapters to unfold. Good job mister author!
I'm enjoying this book as much as I did the last book this writer wrote. Can't wait to see what will become of this story and the conclusion of it.
While I've read this on Fanfiction, this story is always fun to read again. The characters have a good development and grown, and many side characters have their own chance to become badass. A sense of constant struggle, key of both franchise, is always maintained.
Spectacular. Without a doubt. Sdrawkcab is an excellent author who has only improved with this newest edition to the Evolution series. What's impressed me so far is that she wasn't afraid to change up the character dynamics and relationships to further develop their characters. And yet it feels completely reasonable. Keep up the good work! :)-Ninefingers
Among the best novel I have read do far. Try to improve your updating stability
I like the fact that he is not way over the top op.He is beast within justifiable limits.Exp.*=:;*-;%=%-=-(%=;-=%-(!%=++(=%+%(=+)=+$)&+(&&+)$+)&$&+($+($&(-$&&$-((&%(&%+(&%(&7%9&7(%&-(%+9%&6%79957%857$&$78
For the author first novel, honestly it boring.There are too many plot holes and cliches.Mc is a retard and cringey to read.The plot is pretty much generic and predictable.
So, to start, i like what ive read so far, up to chapter nine, but the system needs a little more explanations, and there seem to be some gaps every so often that can leave you puzzled.
Dude I'm sorry but no you ruined the story the whole thing is just trash don't even think of making this mistake into an anime not even a manga you shouldn't have fiddled with it you only have one 1 month to fix this delete all the $h!ty stuff you just posted and repost the original work not this crappy remake I won't drop this novel yet but you only have this one chance otherwise you are gonna lose a lot of subscribers because it was way better before you messed things up ok I loved your work but this remade trash is a disgrace on your part sorry if this sounds harsh but it's true you shouldn't have changed it I was almost dumb enough to start supporting this novel but unless it gets fixed I can't be bothered to even read this anymore I wants to see an apology to the readers how dare you taint our eyes with a remake that made things worse I enjoyed how the story progressed before you messed it up don't let this mistake go uncorrected trust me you would be glad if you listen to my advice here!
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This book sucks..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................