DayaGarg
Well narrated story..kept me hooked up...I am waiting when Evan will mature......................................................................,.....,.,..................................................Author write chapters a bit fast....If u can do that..it will be excellent......
the story is complete hot trash you make it go to fast your grammar is trash but you can get better i know you might not like how i'm saying this but how you made it was trash but if you start taking it slow let us see how he grew how they'r relation ships moved it would be way better than those anti hero storys
This novel has potential. The plot is fascinating and the author's writing skills is impressive. Can't get enough of it. Hope you guys check this out. Keep it up, Author. Hwaiting! ✊??
How long will I wait for the next chapter???????????????????????????????????????????????????
This is one of the review from novel-updates""" It's tolerable for the first 150 chapters, I read 150 - 400 chapters simply because I invested time into the story and didnt want to drop it. Chapters 400 - 640 was pure sh*t and 640 is where I dropped it because all it was for the last 250 chapters was Chinese nationalism.From chapters 400+, the MC was supposed to work with american soldiers to save a journalist. After the MC saves the journalists, it is just american soldiers ****ting on china and the soldiers using derogatory terms towards the MC. After the mission to save the journalist was over they decide to kill the MC because he is Chinese (ofc). The MC kills all the American soldiers and goes back to china.The next mission is going to japan (you should know where this is going). Same thing as above. Chinese people abducted by Japanese people. Japanese people say sh*t bad sh*t about Chinese people. MC kills people for being evil.Next mission MC goes to america and fresh off the plane, people he knows are being bullied and insulted for being Chinese. I dropped the novel right there because all this novel became was some sick hate driven garbage.Im over it. """
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