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I didn't go far into the reading. I am not a fan of the writing style. It seem too 'unrealistic' and out of context to the story.
You would think this is a story about what's started happening now that the 800 years are over, but no. This is a story about all 800 years of cultivating. Staring the MC sitting around and doing NOTHING for 800 years. Also staring a bunch of random people wandering near the MC and getting struck by lightning, lol.
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Website : qidian china Views : 65.09 million Rating : 8.1(900) Chapters : 3264 Status : completed Word count : 18.73 million author rank : lv4
it's the very best novel from webnoveljust so sad that it never bean pick uphope that some day someonei really wish and hope that it will be translated :)
This story definitely has it’s moments. The first few chapters were a bit sluggish to wade through, but it’s passable. Most of my negative experience from this is a run on sentence or laughably unedited chapters. There are some definite highlights within here, but it is locked behind some content that most would stop at. Should give this a read if you have seen your fair share of some pretty sluggish intros.-Spoilers!-The most egregious of the unedited chapters is when Chrome attacks the starting city. In chapter 38 - Unaltered quote from this scene, “ charged forward in a soeed thatvwasn’t seen yet and their jumping abilities and used them and their fearlessness to jump ...” This scene instantly broke any semblance of immersion I had . I would definitely recommend either a proofreader, grammerly, or an editor.-Spoiler end!- In the end, this is a decent novel that has a sluggish start and needs a editor of some kind to fix some basic problems. Probably will stop reading at chapter 62 as the author put some pretty obvious soon to be romance into the thing. But that’s just personal preference.Not meant to be rude to the author or anything, but some proofreading will help the novel a lot.
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This is one of my new favourite book it has good development it portrays the feelings of the MC and the other characters it shows how a normal human being will react in such a situation. It does not have that cliche feeling or the feeling that important things and common sense are totally forgotten. This is a gem ? I recommend it to all apocalyptic and video games lovers and fanatics. Hope for more chapters and faster releases.
I like your writing style but some how the king here was too self absorbed and dint come out worthy of this selfless mate. The way he let his mate physically and emotionally suffer, I felt he needed redemption and not straight forgiveness