ShubhamGupta7905
The novel is something that you usually don't see at webnovel, but it's really amazing.It's really well written, and the quality is fantastic.The novel might not be something that you can read through immediately as some chapters does make you to use your brains and think the chapter through more.But that makes the novel even more interesting, and the author even does some research about the subjects before writing.Also, some of the titles are really interesting, and you are like what will happen in this chapter now? So they are well done for the chapters.But the novel seems to be on the philosophical type, and there is nothing wrong with that, but to some, it might be slow or sometimes random.That's why I suggest to give this novel more time and that you read the chapters through with clear mind sometimes even a couple of times as then this novel's brilliancy will open up and show it's full potential.So give it a try as it is really well written, and you can see that it is worth of the time you have given to it.
More pls , I really enjoyed it , and the work the author did with the world and its history separated into ages, idk if it was inspired from tolkien but it fits nicely in the story. Keep it up
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translations have some inconsistencies. story is bland. for people expecting detective mystery, you will be disappointed. MC has skill that gives him answer to clues that he looks at. other than that it is another standard VRMMO novel.
Hello fellow book lovers, I decided since webnovel wasn't going to update this novel I would. This is not a translation and I take no credit for this story, but I've read it in its entirety so I thought I would share it with all of you. I am mostly just fixing the pronouns and the names that are incorrect in a mtl site so if i mess up with any of the spelling, feel free to let me know and I will fix it. I know right now it's nothing new and webnovel has already translated 60 chapters but please bear with me until I can move them here. I will start chapter 61-80 today hopefully but life may get in my way. I will be posting atleast 20 chapters a day though so don't worry about cliffhangers. This was a long note but I hope you all enjoy the journey in the novel with me.
Not a bad overall read. It’s slightly similar to AFK, just with a slightly less standoffish protagonist, modern setting, and not as OP system. As for the neighbor, she was only in the story for one chapter really — the only lengthy interaction they had was when Qi Shu saved her from a wolf that had found its way into their neighborhood. I don’t know what other people were reading, but it was a perfectly normal scene. Do give it a try.
Omigosh I love this book and I read up to a certain point on my old account theat recently stopped working and now I have a new iPad so the whole story reset but I am not sad to have to read it again this was the besT book I’ve ever read on this site or any other book site I love this soooooooooooo much and plz keep updating! Btw ur the best??????? ??u200d????? #HarryPotterFan
I would so love to rate this story as a 5, however there are some key issues that ruin this story for me.The first major problem in this story is the writing quality. Now I'm not 100% sure, but I'm assuming the author English is a secondary language. The constant and blatant grammatical errors ruin 99% of the immersion of the story for me.The updating doesn't seem to be very stable.The story development seems to be fairly well done, it does need some work though.The character design seems to be fleshed out nicely. The author makes a strong effort to give his mc a strong background story that gives justice to things hes done/is doing.The world background also gets explained fairly well. Though there haven't been many chapters, so far this part seems done as well as can be.Honestly my biggest complaint comes from the writing quality. If the author could fix this, I believe he would have a solid story.
A solid read, it’ s already finished so you don’t have to worry about updating stability, no grammar mistakes and different from your typical cultivation novels. All Chapters are free to read, so you can definitely give it a try.
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This is the novel you're looking for if you're tired of cultivation novels. No cliche, Good story with likable characters. Hope it will move up to the rankings
