'Huh?'
"Well, do what you must." Denear said, giving himself up willingly. 'I just wanted to eat!!' He cried out inside. 'I should not resist or else I might get banned from this place.' Denear took a deep breath once more before getting taken to the "Jail" in this world. 'Ah...I can smell it from the kitchen.' Denear said, satisfied for now.
Charles smiled at her, "I notice that you keep looking at me so intently like that, am I that handsome? Haven't you had enough looking at me everyday?"
I inwardly facepalmed at this idiot who would drag us down, shouting at the top of my lungs, "Liam, be yourself!" I had no idea why'd it sounded inspirational but I had no time to fret! My blade slashed at the
honestly I don't know how to write reviewI like it,simple as that
Nice cultivation background with fairly overpowered character. Like it was used be before. ???
i didn't like the first chapter before rebirth, too flipped out for my taste with forced experiments on humans etc. I kept reading though and like the more normal contents with the FLs everyday life and reevaluation and changes from her former life much better. i liked her not investing in stocks as she did not remember which went well in her former life, sure, because which normal girl not into stocks would know? i'll hang on a bit more and see how it develops. the language is not bad but could do with some proof reading.
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This is a review from a shameless author.Is it worth it to read this novel?Of course, just taste it and don't stop in the middle. ???You like weak people who turn out to be overpowered?You can get Rafe.You like weak people who grow to be strong?You get Hayato.Harem?Nope. Even if Hayato wants one.Ntr, yuri, yaoi?No.I've tried my best and hope all readers enjoy it.If you have any questions or criticism, please feel free to share.Thank you.
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a really good story that does into themes I have never really seen done before. The duel sport was an idea that I really liked, and hope goes further into the story.
I had started reading this story week's ago on a old phone and thought i drempt it up, then on the day I find it again you update it as I'm reading it! Needless to say I am a fan , lol.I really enjoy the Shun's interactions with his summons.That said as far as critiquing it, you could stand to work on sentence structure, also i feel that focusing a bit more on the training that Shun is doing would help with pacing (even if just alittle) other than that i say good job! ^_^