With its start out on hfy for me I was hooked. The character development and world building is some of the best I've ever read. to not give this story a read is a disservice to ones own curiosity and dare I say humanity.
Fairly good. Might be shaping into a harem but I'll have to wait and see. There are some cliche bits but not too bad. The MC seems to have more depth to them than typical WebNovel standards.All in all I think this is worth a read to see if it fits your tastes. I'm planning to add it to my collection and will only drop it if it turns for the worse.
Я искренне не понимаю, почему такое хорошее произведение не имеет достаточно читателей, учитывая тот факт, что написана эта книга довольно таки хорошо.
you should continue the story or give it to someone else to continue cus it is a very good story and has alot of potential
I'm truly impressed with this one.
I love quick transmigration stories and this is my first seeing one with a male mc, I won't talk about spoiling the story, but I will say that the first arc is very powerful, well thought and characters are all fleshed out properly, no seriously I still have lingering attachment with the characters, and I want the mc to continue living in that world, but when I start reading the second arc boom! I think it's now my favorite, character interactions are just interesting and lifelike.
Well even though I loved this story I will be professional since this is a review so I will still have to say cons that I saw to help author sama and some readers.
About the thing I say about lingering attachment about first arc is true, and I think the author is to be blamed(seriously) even though it's just a trial but I think Author haven't closed the story very well, ahem sorry for this little spoiler, I seriously thought that the time Traveller girl would be a love interest since I get the fate vibes but I was left in a cliffhanger since he suddenly left in the middle of a "date" (If you already plan the mc to return to previous world then I won't say anymore but if not please consider giving the girl justice by giving her a chapter dedicated only for her.)
Even though this story is not that kind of genre the mc should have take his mission seriously and thought more about it, considering he will be dealing with "villainess" he should at least fortify his physical self defense and since he has a goal he should at least be more proactive into preparation since the system doesn't say that it will be always modern world he will be transmigrated in and I always think in real life that what is given can also be taken if he fail his mission his goal might just pop into nothingness unless this saving world from villainess is just farse and failing from preventing villainess to cause harm and death will have no consequences or punishment.
Well that's for my review even with the cons I still love this story so I'm giving it 5 stars, cuz also knew that a novel is always a novel and never will be reality that's why inconsistency and lack of data would be always present.
I only managed to get through the first 6 chapters....
The grammar and syntax are beyond bad. The author miss-uses tenses a lot. Infact he interchangeably uses them in every other sentence. Even the average 6th grader should have a better grasp on atleast the 4 simplest and when to use them:
Simple past/past progressive and simple present/present progressive.
To the author: I am not trying to disparage your work but you are honestly not that gifted when it comes to grammar, either study up or get an editor to do the work for you.
One last thing: even in the earlier chapter you are artificially inflating your wordcount. You are creating needlessly complicated sentences that no one understands and break syntax. Keep the sentences short, it will improve flow, you'll make less mistakes and the reader will in no way be confused.
Sorry about this .... I find the idea of the novel promising. However i keep finding it lacking... Take this as point to improve.
1. You need to explain always how stats work. Dont put stats like str agi int char res without proper explaining what they are for.
2. You need to stick with the idea that mc is a isekai/reincarnated person from earth. So he should probably know how to play any for of rpg games. However for the the last 30+ chapter i have read the mc dont give a **** at all.
3. What is the mechanic of his system. How does he gain the skills. What is the use of level up. How many free stat point do he gain every lvl. No explaination was given thus making the whole thing confusing.
4. Explain the power ranking of the world. Explain the world his on more. Its not like earth you know. His leveling up how does everybody else getting strong. It not like his the only person strong in the story.
So, I normally don't leave reviews, but I was so disgusted by the stupidity of just the 1st half of the opening chapter, I had to rant....
Anyways, imagine a circle about 10 paces across
Now, imagine that circle is A KILOMETER away
Got it pictured? Can you even see the circle anymore?
Ok, now imagine looking out that circle a kilometer away and noticing enough details of the heavens to recognize not just that there are 2 suns, but that they are different sizes and brightnesses
Cause looking thru a giant, unmagnified, tube is so fucking useful for observation
I don't care if it's only the start, I don't care if it gets better, this author should be castrated to prevent such stupidity from being passed on to our future gene pool
The plot development, character development, and fight scenes take precedence here. The pace seems slow compared to other cultivation novels, but this Novel's strength is in the details. Great read
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Such a rare cultivation novel which is different from the usual cliche generic trash we always get. I would be really disappointed in Qidian if this doesnt get picked while generic trashes are being chosen.