The chapters are jumbled and the story changes abruptly and is hard to find the original and it also deviates from the original raws. The story is a Frankenstein of multiple good novels, for example "My senior brother is too steady". Its story and character development is extremely similar, but sadly where the other novel prospered this novel fails. If the author or the site decides to stop updating new chapters and put some effort into reworking the novel then it might still be salvageable.
So, I really liked this novel. I thought it was an interesting use of the simulator, and kind of funny. I just want people to know that I read the RAWs and the story ends all of sudden. Like, literally everything is normal one chapter, and then the next it has a simulation that ends with a summary of the end of the series, and then at the end the author apologizes to all the readers @.@ Just giving people a warning before they use coins. Use free passes for this series! I still enjoyed it!
Read a bit of it but its a good novel... A bit too similar to Dual Cultivation which I am reading so I probably won't continue with it... Author should accept the similarities are too much to not agree he got inspired by Dual Cultivation... Nothing wrong with being inspired and writing a similar but different type of novel... The worst thing to do is deny it was inspired by another... Not crediting or acknowledging or denying the source is as bad as it gets...
I love the story but the way his family members treat him I can't accept I can't keep reading it I did like the first 100 Chapters the mom pissed me off.
Hey it’s an ok story, to me nothing really stand out on this on ,, it’s your usual novel about mc cause of not awakening power get bullied and somewhere down the line somehow he is gonna awaken his power and probably get an op beast and take revenge on the one who bullied him.. update schedule that’s a 3 cause 10 days go by with no update so it’s random... chapter length are really short like 9 page of nothing so far 25 chapter nothing really happens in the story.... it’s your average book you can read to pass the time if you have nothing serious to read.... the title of the book ruthless dragon god hey if you wait long enough for around 500 chapter which is gonna be around 2028 cause of slow update, MC might become one...
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Writing quality: Tbh your writing quality is pretty good not too many errors but hey man nothing is perfectStability of update: I gotta give you 5 stars for that you posted 10 chaps 6 days ago and posted like 20 the past day I think?Story development: Well man what do you expect? So far each world he comes back from he lives a whole new life and only gets 10 soul power yes your logic is 1 to 10 is a average human but dang man first world lookism he became more famous then Eminem and a boxing champ maybe give him a little more? One other thing The fact that he has to keep doing these quests till he dies kinda sucks if he doesn't complete the quest he dies. Plus from so for there isn't really any real development mostly it's the same thing so far go do world mission come back with more soul power get smarter make more money boom next world and repeatCharacter design: How is he not messed up yet? He has lived multiple lives. Yes ik he has higher soul power but come on man he doesn't have the gamer mind or anything? He lived 89 years with the (love) of his life he cries and mourns for a little yes but then he comes back enjoys his youth and thinks about how is soul power can be like conjuror haki from one pieceWorld background: Uh nothing too new compared to canonThere you go my review plus hey author if you want a excuse to make your mc op with soul power make the next world mission bleach? Boom he will be very op when he comes. Back from there
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Volume 1 is good. Very good. Volume 2- A lot of chapters, do not make sense. The author went along the path of the text, for the sake of the text. Lost dynamics. Volume 2 - a snail crawling in a small circle.The character development in Volume 1 . Volume 2- development canceled and stuck in place. They have become dumber.
this was a great book! loved the characters and the story plot.
Really enjoy this Fantasy style story. Thank you.