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Writing quality: Tbh your writing quality is pretty good not too many errors but hey man nothing is perfectStability of update: I gotta give you 5 stars for that you posted 10 chaps 6 days ago and posted like 20 the past day I think?Story development: Well man what do you expect? So far each world he comes back from he lives a whole new life and only gets 10 soul power yes your logic is 1 to 10 is a average human but dang man first world lookism he became more famous then Eminem and a boxing champ maybe give him a little more? One other thing The fact that he has to keep doing these quests till he dies kinda sucks if he doesn't complete the quest he dies. Plus from so for there isn't really any real development mostly it's the same thing so far go do world mission come back with more soul power get smarter make more money boom next world and repeatCharacter design: How is he not messed up yet? He has lived multiple lives. Yes ik he has higher soul power but come on man he doesn't have the gamer mind or anything? He lived 89 years with the (love) of his life he cries and mourns for a little yes but then he comes back enjoys his youth and thinks about how is soul power can be like conjuror haki from one pieceWorld background: Uh nothing too new compared to canonThere you go my review plus hey author if you want a excuse to make your mc op with soul power make the next world mission bleach? Boom he will be very op when he comes. Back from there

                         Classic anime protagonist                                                                                               

If you're picking this book. Do know that there is a lot of show-not-tell moment. Keep in mind, if the protagonist is talking to something, someone, or himself, he will, and always put on a smile.This detail is rarely mentioned by him narrating it, but the cues throughout the story hinted it, and the people around him will sometimes mention it in their dialog.That took me a moment to notice on first few chapters. Hope this will elevate the experience of whoever as clueless as I do at first read. If not, it is a fun detail to mention imo.Basically, the mc is one smug little basta-

In what world is plagiarism okay? Quit making up reasons to claim other people's content under your own name and try to wring some ideas out of that thing you call a brain.

It has a dungeon vibe, but thats all. The writing is weird sometimes, with typos there and there, the characters are bidimensional and the story goes too fast, making any evolution in characters akward. The main character is a secondary character and the story is writen in first person in present, a curious choice, but also harder to use. To be fair I only read a third of the book, mainly because a got bored. Is very light, but this factor is more of a personal taste. The main character is also extremly naive, and aparently everyone is. If you want a light non complex  dungeon "theme" novel, this would do the trick, but not very good otherwise.

I missed him so much.